Neela Nath Das

When The East Awakes - Poem by Neela Nath Das

When the east awakes,
The west goes to bed.
The east then keeps vigil...
Until the day does fade,
While the east wants rest.
Just then jumping on his
Feet rises the west.

God has divided duty
In such a divine way!
We must not break His law,
To usher in the good day!

Comments about When The East Awakes by Neela Nath Das

  • Loppo Louie (11/20/2016 11:40:00 AM)

    WhenThe East awaits
    i like this poem.
    Really good.
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  • Vincent Kuo (6/10/2012 11:21:00 AM)

    Lovely poem with a wise message! May I invite you to read my poem Break of Dawn also with similar elemets, I'm sure you'll find it quite interesting. I'd be honoured to hear what you have to say. (Report) Reply

  • Dougie Fresh (6/6/2012 8:17:00 AM)

    Absolutely love it! ! ! ! ! Nice work Ma'am! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (6/4/2012 8:33:00 AM)

    I am quite inquisitive, Nilakshi Nath,1. why does the East keep vigil and Is there any specific reason for keeping vigil? 2. 'We must not break His law', which means is it possible for us to break the Law of Nature? Could you please explain? Thank you.. (Report) Reply

  • (6/2/2012 11:58:00 AM)

    I relate it to the contradiction of time, between the gaps of east and west, its a really well pened and creatively molded write, one that draws a smile in me, wonderful Nilakshi!

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  • (6/1/2012 10:17:00 PM)

    High spirit of morality and religious theme in it with elements of narratin the law of nature (Report) Reply

  • Captain Cur (6/1/2012 11:43:00 AM)

    The guard duty of west and east with cultures unique to each.
    Now the west can rest knowing the East will do their best.
    Loved this poem.
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  • Hans Vr (6/1/2012 7:59:00 AM)

    The amazing time differences in our world, so nicely described in this poem.
    I fully agree that we should respect day and night as much as we can.
    When I was young, people had a party from 8 pm till 12 midnight.
    Now parties seem to start only at 12 midnight.
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  • (5/31/2012 11:12:00 PM)

    amusing personification.... (Report) Reply

  • Sharad Juneja (5/31/2012 7:41:00 AM)

    A nice work Nilakshi :) (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilson (5/30/2012 5:16:00 AM)

    Yes, it`s all a matter of spinning on this ball we call earth, a nice description. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (5/29/2012 11:58:00 PM)

    Spinning earth, half meet sun half left in the dark...and so this life nothing will keep in dark forever and nothng will going bright every moment...West and East be one in a sober life..nice write_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 29, 2012

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