Large spider webs hid
Between the streaks of switchgrass
When the morning dew
Drips and the great sun rises
The wildest wild garden shines.
Copyright 2022, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
Yes I agree with Unnikrishnan I would love to be there Bravo!
ONE: I cite from your poem these lines: When the morning dew Drips and the great sun rises..............so very imaginable, a most glistening scene lay in front of us, this is a fascinating Tanka from your own surrounds, dear friend, how truthfully described
TWO: and indeed the wildest wild garden shines.5 Stars Top score and myriad more for this morning Beauty. I have utmost enjoyed, dear friend
Nice imagery. Dew sunshine and spider web together make a morning garden great
Keen observation. We can see cob webs in various shapes like spread nets, hollow tunnel etc. wth dew drops waiting to be vaporised in the early sun
Did I already suggest 'hide' for 'hid' and a period at end of line 2? bri : )
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Enchanting beautiful picture of the garden in the dawn. Loved it, Rose Marie. Top score. And onto Myfavourites