When The Morning Dew Drips - Tanka Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Enchanting beautiful picture of the garden in the dawn. Loved it, Rose Marie. Top score. And onto Myfavourites

Yes I agree with Unnikrishnan I would love to be there Bravo!

ONE: I cite from your poem these lines: When the morning dew Drips and the great sun rises..............so very imaginable, a most glistening scene lay in front of us, this is a fascinating Tanka from your own surrounds, dear friend, how truthfully described

TWO: and indeed the wildest wild garden shines.5 Stars Top score and myriad more for this morning Beauty. I have utmost enjoyed, dear friend

Brilliant work......thank u, dear poetess.

Nice imagery. Dew sunshine and spider web together make a morning garden great

"The wildest wild garden shines" and ever so brightly!

Revisiting I find it so marvellous!

Keen observation. We can see cob webs in various shapes like spread nets, hollow tunnel etc. wth dew drops waiting to be vaporised in the early sun

Did I already suggest 'hide' for 'hid' and a period at end of line 2? bri : )