When The Brightest And Biggest Star Departs Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines

When The Brightest And Biggest Star Departs

Rating: 4.6


After spreading her gold for the day
In so many directions and ways
The Sun is ready to depart
And rest to give chance to night
When it finally sets above the horizon
Its golden beams create magical color tones
That bring warmth to creation
Inspiring us to look forward to
A beautiful tomorrow.


Copyright 2020, Rose Mare Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 25 July 2020

The Sun is ready to depart/And rest to give chance to night/When it finally sets above the horizon.......Candid poetic expression! A very commendable piece of poetry! Top score.

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Shaun Cronick 21 July 2020

A most beautiful poem written by a world class poetess on top of her game. For Rose Marie Juan Austin is poetess who knows how to weave poems of pure gold for one and all that shine. A superb and enchanting poem Rose Marie,10++ and added to my poems of sheer class display cabinet. Take care and I wish you well and the loved ones around you.

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Sandra Feldman 21 July 2020

A most beautiful and poetically sincere, inspired description of a Sunset. Like finely woven lace images and feelings find their worded grace. A brilliant gem!

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Akhtar Jawad 21 July 2020

A nice poem on a hopeful tomorrow. Marie Juan Austin is on her climax.

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Unnikrishnan E S 22 July 2020

This short poem speaks of the selfless life of Sun. How he spends his day showering his benevolence (poet says “gold”) on everything. Earth, and of course man, is just one such beneficiary. Then he leaves the scene for the Night-Star to take over. And how is Sun rewarded for his selfless act? The entire universe turns into an ocean of colours to bid him adieu. Naturally. Lovely poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 August 2020

Golden beams of love and life! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Yes, every sunset is hope for tomorrow to dawn

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Soran M. H 28 July 2020

Amazing masterpiece of work by a great poet always deserves 10++ and on to the Fav List Well done and thanks for sharing

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Soran M. H 28 July 2020

After spreading her gold for the day In so many directions and ways Rose Marie Juan Austin is ready to depart And rest to give chance to night When she is finally sets on the top list of poets her golden beams create magical means of love and peace Inspiring us to look forward to the beauty of life .

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 July 2020

Inspiring us to look forward to A beautiful tomorrow........beautifully crafted the star departs the sun comes the sun departs the moon comes the dark night departs the enlightened day comes the present departs the future comes oh; never come the past but every present greets the every present with the would be FORM like the would be SPOUSE......

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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