When The Sky Opened Poem by Kasia Fedyk
When The Sky Opened
Only in my dreams do you come to me
in a silhouette of sun rays merging with my moon light
your lips are my flame
an apple in ripeness
but only if you knew
a ghost in platinum engraved
with no time.
A Holy Ghost I see
when my eyes are covered with the thin skin
and my lashes flatter shut close
I look into your eyes
where white doves sit on its pupil
embracing the core of me human
with flesh so humbled
and low into the holy ground
love, in love I walk
on the feathers of your creation
come and dwell in my love's essence
-solicit me
so I may awaken from the dream I am
into the eternity
of everlasting
Divinity.
When the sky opened.
oh when the sky opened of course... i love the detail....lovely
Dream, eternity and divinity all are present in this superb piece.Kasia, really I loved it.10+++
ahaaa...this is one of the best i ever read...i love everything from beginning till the end...kudos.. :)
Fervent and religious....zealous in passion Deep and allegorical Well conceived and forceful Nice write...ageless, timeless Cheers sat
on feathers of creation... white doves sit on its pupil... some wonderful images! the title itself is another....
'when the sky opened...', and the winged creature that is your soul flew free!
look into your eyes where white doves sit on its pupil embracing the core of me human
A very beautiful poem Kasia! ! Excellent detail. Enjoyed reading it. Williams, T.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/7/2025 2:00:37 AM # 1.0.0
Beautiful, very insightful - enjoyed the read.