When Victory Comes Poem by Sankhajit Bhattacharjee

When Victory Comes

Rating: 4.8


I touch the sun with my right hand.
I kiss the moon.
I rest my feet on this earth,
while the stars twinkle with my senses.

I sit on the snow-capped peak.
I dance on the ocean bed.
I sleep in the forest deep.
The desert fills my mind with peaceful silence.

I ride on a wild horse.
I fly high with a kite.
I roam from flower to flower with a buzzing bee
and the nectar soothes my heart with heavenly sweetness.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frederick Kesner 14 October 2019

Soothing and fluid, with such ease, allows the reader with an unspoken invite to accompany its journey.

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Hans Vr 04 October 2019

Perception at it very highest, when we set free the deepest interior self. I loved to read it, my thoughts flew and rendered me a breeze of joy.

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Rus Mer 01 October 2019

I ride on a wild horse. I fly high with a kite. I roam from flower to flower with a buzzing bee and the nectar soothes my heart with heavenly sweetness.... so appealing imagery and sensuousness

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 September 2019

Every poem penned in sweetness is like a sweet victory....10+++

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Anjandev Roy 15 May 2021

Sublime piece......like it.....thank u.

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 April 2020

I ride on a wild horse. I fly high with a kite. I roam from flower to flower with a buzzing bee and the nectar soothes my heart with heavenly sweetness. Beautiful poem. what a wonderful imagination my dear poetess. tony

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 20 February 2020

Verily, the wings of imagination are par excellence. Right description indeed.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 November 2019

I ride on a wild horse. I fly high with a kite.......wonderful imagination! A magnificent poem.....Top score!

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Chinedu Dike 31 October 2019

An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely brought forth with clarity of thought and mind.

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