Chuck Audette

Rookie - 59 Points (Poetry Hell, Vermont)

When You'Re Least Expecting... - Poem by Chuck Audette

prior to
our dinner date

she called
and said

she was late
'so hurry up! '
'not like that.'


Comments about When You'Re Least Expecting... by Chuck Audette

  • (5/9/2006 11:42:00 AM)


    I am a bit slow.....did not catch on for a few brow furrowing moments...but then....AAHhaa! Barb (Report) Reply

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  • (5/3/2006 3:59:00 AM)


    oh-oh! ! Better late than never? ? ? ? No huh? ?
    Dee
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  • (5/2/2006 10:17:00 AM)


    because he forgot to wear a hat
    not like that

    Thanks for the smile Mr A

    Hugs
    Anna xxx
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  • (5/1/2006 11:55:00 AM)


    Excellent! a concise narrative complete with story, misunderstanding, the penny dropping, surprise reaction and humour too - very clever. Justine (Report) Reply

  • (4/29/2006 9:29:00 AM)


    I like that I had to read this two and a half times before I got it......! Sum Dim, me! For all the men out there who think it's the worst when she's late for a date... there ARE worse things! Classic Chuck here, and thanks for the funny! ! ! Est : ] (Report) Reply

  • (4/29/2006 2:11:00 AM)


    Oh Oh, Charles! I have been there! Great poem! Automatic 10! (Report) Reply

  • Brian Dorn (4/28/2006 11:17:00 PM)


    Charles, when it comes to women... expect the unexpected. Nice write!
    Brian
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  • (4/28/2006 6:12:00 PM)


    Well done Charles, got me thinking.
    'A closed mouth gathers no feet, '
    This was great, Love Duncan
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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 28, 2006

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 20, 2010


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