When You'Re Least Expecting... Poem by Chuck Audette

When You'Re Least Expecting...

Rating: 5.0


prior to
our dinner date

she called
and said

she was late
'so hurry up! '
'not like that.'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 28 April 2006

Well done Charles, got me thinking. 'A closed mouth gathers no feet, ' This was great, Love Duncan

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Brian Dorn 28 April 2006

Charles, when it comes to women... expect the unexpected. Nice write! Brian

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Nick Percowycz 29 April 2006

Oh Oh, Charles! I have been there! Great poem! Automatic 10!

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Barbara Attaway 09 May 2006

I am a bit slow.....did not catch on for a few brow furrowing moments...but then....AAHhaa! Barb

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Dee Daffodil 03 May 2006

oh-oh! ! Better late than never? ? ? ? No huh? ? Dee

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Anna Russell 02 May 2006

because he forgot to wear a hat not like that Thanks for the smile Mr A Hugs Anna xxx

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R H 01 May 2006

Excellent! a concise narrative complete with story, misunderstanding, the penny dropping, surprise reaction and humour too - very clever. Justine

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Esther Leclerc 29 April 2006

I like that I had to read this two and a half times before I got it......! Sum Dim, me! For all the men out there who think it's the worst when she's late for a date... there ARE worse things! Classic Chuck here, and thanks for the funny! ! ! Est : ]

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Chuck Audette

Chuck Audette

Poetry Hell, Vermont
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