Bernard Snyder

Gold Star - 7,182 Points (11-07-1959 / Savannah Ga.)

'Where The Truth Lies' - Poem by Bernard Snyder

She calls herself an independent woman
so what am I to think,
when she sits next to me at the bar
and asks me to pay for drinks,
she says she doesn't kiss on ‘first dates'
but isn't it strange,
that raspberry flavored lipstick
has left quite a stain,
she lift my shirt and feels my ‘six-pack'
and says ‘she's not impressed,
yet she smiles and get her camera
as soon as I undress,
she considers me to be a ‘playboy'
and says, she's never liked my kind,
but takes me home and get real ‘kinky'
then say, it's her first time,
so when I ‘flip the script' and tell her ‘she's the ‘best'
the reason she feels its untrue,
because she's been ‘frontin' for so long
it's hard to tell a lie from the truth!

Comments about 'Where The Truth Lies' by Bernard Snyder

  • Eden Panotes Orbista (9/8/2013 12:18:00 AM)

    the truth lies beneath....hahaha honesty please, your subject if she's real, must have observed, less talk, less mistake, ....she was caught in her own trap, but this is full of humor, well written.... (Report) Reply

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  • Khairul Ahsan (8/13/2013 7:58:00 PM)

    A story told in not too many words, with good humor.
    The last two lines complete the description of his woman.
    The last line answers the question at the title.
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  • (8/1/2013 10:41:00 AM)

    I have to give you props! ! 10+. (Report) Reply

  • (1/9/2013 4:42:00 AM)

    made me smile, witty little rhyme (Report) Reply

  • (1/9/2013 4:42:00 AM)

    made me smile, witty little rhyme (Report) Reply

  • Paul Brookes (1/6/2013 3:02:00 AM)

    Great well written with just a tinge of humour loves it....................................: O) (Report) Reply

  • Ellias Anderson Jr. (9/15/2012 12:13:00 PM)

    This poem is so magnificent and great. nice paradox is used at the title of the poem.
    great one.
    well done.
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  • (8/21/2012 1:55:00 PM)

    Hi Bernard, Good and humerous, like your wit and talent. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 16, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, August 17, 2012

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