Where Were You? Poem by Falana Zion
Where Were You?
Where were you?
In that silent night
Where were you,
During the dark time
Where were you?
When the oceans held its tide
When the life held the time
all to take a life
When the rivers flowed,
Without looking back
When the moon and the stars
Fell on the happy heart
Where were you?
When all looked blurry,
Like a saddening story
When the pages were no more glaring
Where were you
When the pages were about to close
When the tree was about to crumble
Where were you, where were you
O ye the breath of life
Well articulated and nicely brought forth with insight. Thanks for sharing, Zion.
Here am I, my dear poet , imbibing aesthetic energy from your words of darktimes. Happy to read your melancholic melody, soothing with an echoing question... Desamangalam Ramakrishnan, Kerala, India
Here am I, my dear poet , imbibing aesthetic energy from your words of darktimes. Happy to read your melancholic melody, soothing with an echoing question
I love your tender subtlties along with your demands for an answer for the too often unanswerable and gut wrenching question of 'where were you'? It attacks my sensorium on many levels. It has an ebb and a flow, a low and a high tide
Makes one wonder and ponder. Well written! Thank you. Pangiota
Very impressive write, Falana Zion. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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oceans held its ride ...TIDE WOULD BE BETTER WHERE WERE YOU ALL THIS TIME NOW ALSO READ MOMS SMILES ETC AND TELL ME WHERE WERE YOU GOOD POET FRIEND R U FIZ