Dying To Live Poem by Falana Zion

Dying To Live

Rating: 5.0


I will continue to live on
Without giving up to the moon
The ice is broken
The old tombs are filled with rickety worms
Painful odds of time are like block of stars

The old cranky time reminiscing the stars
are memories seasoned with gleeful tears,
like a babe dreaming of stairs.

The time keep on breaking the tears
and the odds of the past
seem like a dot of black on the future's sky
Yet, I will risk though hard to dream
I'll keep on dying,
Without giving up to the moon
For within me, I love to live.

Thursday, July 25, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bryony Sheldon 25 July 2019

Amazing and well written poem!

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Ramesh T A 29 July 2019

This guts is needed to survive, sustain and succeed ever in world life sure! Thanks for sharing you nice poem here!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 July 2019

An excellent write, Falana...10+++

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Richard Wlodarski 29 July 2019

An inspirational write with powerful imagery.

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Von Klassique 11 November 2021

Powerful and well written! ! ??

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Diane Montemayor 11 August 2019

I love to live - powerful line.. Thanks

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Michael Hopkins 06 August 2019

A beautifully crafted poem. You are a poet sir.

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Uche Nwanze 01 August 2019

Please read my poems, especially ' When I am gone' and 'Lagos: A city that never sleeps'. Thanks

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Falana Zion 02 August 2019

Alright Nwamze, I'll check it out.

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Uche Nwanze 01 August 2019

Amazing, keep the fingers itchy to write more.

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Falana Zion

Falana Zion

Ekiti State, Nigeria
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