A Wish Come True Poem by Falana Zion

A well written composition. Simply marvelous...10++

I like your poem. It has nice meter, nice rhyme and a nice spirit. However " Just like the way you do" doesn't really go with trees being beautiful. Perhaps consider: The trees are beautiful Just like you OR The trees are beautiful And so are you

Very nice poem. Keep on going....

Very nice poem. Keep on going.

Brilliant articulation. It transforms love into a thing of the other world. This is an outstanding piece of poetry. Thanks a lot.

FIZ, I just scrolled down your list of titles and would like to return to read more. Are any you esp. would like me to read and comment on? bri :)

I don't know why it's spelled this way, with just two " e" s, while I think it is pronounced like it has 3! undefinable [ˌəndəˈfīnəb(ə) l] DEFINITION adjective form of undefined ................... Anyway it is very clear the speaker REALLY LIKES the object (man or woman) spoken of. Nice. bri ;)

Falana Idowu Zion, May your wish come True. The Poem The Smile, The Gaze, The, Beauty, The Smile, Bright and Beautiful, Beyond Beautiful, Undeniable, " You're just a wish come true" The poet's ardent longing for the wish is well evident and clearly portrayed. Keep on writing.

Simple and beautiful poem. Loved its flow. Thanks for sharing.

as seen thru the eyes of love! good write