Whisky Poem by Rini Shibu

Whisky

Rating: 4.7


Give yourself to me
you are mine
This night is ours
Dipped inside the whisky
Oh my chocolate chipped cookies
Swarmed in love
Whole world is under our foot
You are my food
Mashmellows dipped in chocolate
Is the taste of your lips
Your eyes are so sharp
Pierce deep inside in me
The ache of love
Make me dead
I am completely yours
Let's fade in this whisky

Monday, August 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 16 August 2017

A beautiful poem on love and wine. Enjoyed.

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Rini Shibu 16 August 2017

Thank you so much Anil..

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 December 2022

A wonderful love poem with aroma of alcohol... thoroughly romantic. Liked this imaginative composition. Full marks.

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Castellenas John 28 May 2019

True words for whiskey. Whiskey lead to no-where. A powerful and worthwhile poem shared.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 October 2018

lovely smiling and danceable music I can also hear it

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 August 2017

You are mine! ! Love and dreams. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 20 August 2017

Thanks Edward... Rini

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Richard Wlodarski 20 August 2017

Ah! Drinking whisky will never be the same again! Good one, Rini!

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Rini Shibu 20 August 2017

Thanks Richard.. Taste the flavors of love

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