Whispers Poem by Rini Shibu

Whispers

Rating: 4.8


At the sweet hours of a sunny day
I plucked the colors
from blossoms of your garden
I stole the frangnance
And tasted the sweet honey
as a bee flew over me
The warmth in the air
played a tune for me
They hummed together
and the sky whispered
to float among the breeze
And vanish with the mist

Sunday, October 14, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 14 October 2018

A dreamy poem, full of scents and images!

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Carl Roussell 31 October 2018

This poem has been added to my favourites - wonderful the imagery!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 October 2018

beautiful poeming small typoing only stole the fragrance it must have been

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Unnikrishnan E S 14 October 2018

Hi Rini, Very sweet, with lovely train of images.

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Lamar Cole 14 October 2018

This is a very wonderful and enjoyable poem with great imagery.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 October 2018

A sweet poem of love that warms the heart. Great imagery.

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