White Pain Poem by Pia Andersson

White Pain

Rating: 4.3


White pain
questioned me,
never my actions.
Allowed laughter,
but never joy.
Ate me up from within.
Leaving nothing,
not even my selfpity
to protect me.

White pain
reduced me,
robbed me,
of what was once mine.
Leaving me
with blank fingertips.

I realize,
that the road
I will take,
will change.
The map
will not be found
this time.

God,
let your love
shine through me.
Give me peace.
Lead me back
to myself again.

Let me be Yours
and let me be me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 26 October 2009

Great poem, very powerful. I liked especially these words: '.........not even my selfpity to protect me.'

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Akram Awadat 25 October 2009

great work, well done

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 16 October 2009

great poem.......................

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Linda Weischedel 23 December 2007

Absolutle an amazing write about pain, and the love you have for God! Awesome poem, I give you a 10 for this. Always, Linda

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Rajaram Ramachandran 13 October 2007

Your every word sparkles your love for God. That shows your divine heart and loving nature.

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Simone Inez Harriman 03 November 2015

I feel your loss and heartache in every word.....10

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Rekha Mandagere 24 May 2012

The poem poses a problem and ends with a solution! Very nice poem :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 April 2010

The expression white pain itself is very original. laughter without joy, blank fingertips. your conviction that it will change, and final prayer to God. it is very nice dear pia. God bless you.

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Tony Fiona 09 December 2009

a wonderful expression of the pain of self doubt and guilt well written tony

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Luis Gil 09 December 2009

You are so right..... The pain that leaves you numb.... Without hope.... When nothing can possibly be the same again. Yes, that pain is white.

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