Pia Andersson

White Pain - Poem by Pia Andersson

White pain
questioned me,
never my actions.
Allowed laughter,
but never joy.
Ate me up from within.
Leaving nothing,
not even my selfpity
to protect me.

White pain
reduced me,
robbed me,
of what was once mine.
Leaving me
with blank fingertips.

I realize,
that the road
I will take,
will change.
The map
will not be found
this time.

let your love
shine through me.
Give me peace.
Lead me back
to myself again.

Let me be Yours
and let me be me.

Comments about White Pain by Pia Andersson

  • Simone Inez Harriman (11/3/2015 7:15:00 PM)

    I feel your loss and heartache in every word.....10 (Report) Reply

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  • (5/24/2012 11:58:00 PM)

    The poem poses a problem and ends with a solution! Very nice poem :) (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (4/21/2010 7:25:00 PM)

    The expression white pain itself is very original.
    laughter without joy,
    blank fingertips.
    your conviction that it will change, and final prayer to God.
    it is very nice dear pia. God bless you.
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  • (12/9/2009 9:51:00 PM)

    a wonderful expression of the pain of self doubt and guilt
    well written
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  • (12/9/2009 5:02:00 PM)

    You are so right..... The pain that leaves you numb.... Without hope.... When nothing can possibly be the same again.

    Yes, that pain is white.
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  • Sathyanarayana M V S (10/26/2009 1:54:00 AM)

    Great poem, very powerful. I liked especially these words:
    '.........not even my selfpity
    to protect me.'
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  • (10/25/2009 2:10:00 PM)

    great work, well done (Report) Reply

  • Chris G. Vaillancourt (10/16/2009 4:22:00 PM)

    great poem....................... (Report) Reply

  • (12/23/2007 2:36:00 PM)

    Absolutle an amazing write about pain,
    and the love you have for God!
    Awesome poem, I give you a 10 for this.
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  • Rajaram Ramachandran (10/13/2007 6:21:00 AM)

    Your every word sparkles your love for God. That shows your divine heart and loving nature. (Report) Reply

  • (10/1/2007 11:48:00 PM)

    Any pain blue or white is enough to make us ponder and recollect.... for without experiencing pain we can not learn that we are human who got varied emotions. Thanks for sharing, top mark. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (9/14/2007 3:53:00 PM)

    The earthly love disillusioned, , , , , , , , , , yet asking for the love divine, Pia- it is beautiful, i love it, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • (9/14/2007 2:54:00 AM)

    Quite an excellent poem. It speaks of a love lost and frenzy of mind. A cry for love and togetherness. Well done. Milda (Report) Reply

  • (9/11/2007 11:23:00 AM)

    God will help you, your friends will help you and i will send you a map to the
    Morvan Chrisx
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  • (9/9/2007 8:21:00 AM)

    lovely poem. keep writing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 9, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 6, 2011

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