Whole Cosmos Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Whole Cosmos

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We see this universe as a whole,
As created by ocean of peace,
Our God brings mystery for us,
We are affectionate of course.
We are eternal souls we feel,
This truth is revealed by father.
Our bodies die but we do not,
Leaving body so far in this Earth,
We fly in galaxy in angelic bodies.

Each tiny cell records our deeds,
In whole cosmos every wave spreads,
The deeds we perform at each moment,
According to our action we get back,
Fruits come as reactions we enjoy.

This planet is not only meant for us,
Other creatures too have freedom to live,
This Earth is God's garden we love,
To every creature we shall respect.
Soul is self luminous point of light,
This conscious energy is very peaceful,
We are all peaceful souls in whole cosmos.

Whole cosmos wonders us filled with stars,
But this is beautiful as all dazzle,
We perceive every star in mind in awakening,
Self awakening revives values of cosmos.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,09 September 2018. All rights reserved.

Whole Cosmos
Sunday, September 9, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death,philosophical ,spiritual,universe
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Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,30 September 2017. All rights reserved.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 09 September 2018

excellent pensive and philosophical writing

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 10 September 2018

A brilliant muses poem wow poet! With golden advices as well. Things we all should learn and follow. Kudos.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 September 2018

Kumarmani, such a wonderful write...10+++++ but I can’t rate due to ads😅😅😅

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 August 2019

Ocean Of Peace! ! Works on earth, Muse of the Universe. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mihaela Pirjol 14 September 2018

Thank you, Mr Kumarmani Mahakul, thank you for existing, and writing poetry of such spiritual profundity! That is what humanity needs!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 September 2018

A well executed spiritual write. Yes, we shall respect all God's creations for in the end there will be an accounting of all we have done on earth. A great poem with a meaningful message.10+++

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Mahtab Bangalee 11 September 2018

nice and truly said- This planet is not only meant for us, Other creatures too have freedom to live, This Earth is God's garden we love, To every creature we shall respect.

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Valsa George 10 September 2018

Yes, what we sow, we reap! This cosmos is created mainly for man and his well being by God! But we are not the only beneficiaries of it! All living beings are party to it! We should respect all and live in harmonious unity with Nature and all creation of God! Lofty thoughts!

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Kumarmani Mahakul

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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