Akanksha Bhatt

Rookie - 20 Points (27-11-1998 / Dehradun India)

Why Am I So Confused - Poem by Akanksha Bhatt

Once I was getting very much bored
I asked my mind what to do dude
He said 'Sit quietly, doing nothing,
spring comes and the grass grows by itself'.
I was confused cuz I didn't understood.

Then what! I asked my heart the same one,
It said what can you do instead of that
which is present inside your soal,
which is present inside you girl!
I was confused cuz I didn't understood.

Then I thought of the poetry.
I wrote all my emotions,
which I'd never thought I could.
Poetry can be done by only few,
It is just a magic trick,
I've completed my three poems,
Vow! Its just a hat-trick.

Then I asked myself that
'Why I was so confused and
Why I didn't understood,
Why am I so confused? !
WHY AM I SO CONFUSED! ? ..


Comments about Why Am I So Confused by Akanksha Bhatt

  • Sandeep Dubey (5/28/2013 4:14:00 AM)

    Nice.....U r not confused actually.. :) ..nice one. (Report)Reply

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  • Sandy Player (1/4/2013 8:36:00 AM)

    It bubbles with Energy! im glad this Is the 1st of your poems I've read, it's a great introduction into you as a poet. (Report)Reply

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  • Sahil Sood (11/1/2012 11:22:00 AM)

    Great poem.. I njoyed reading it.. Keep writing... (Report)Reply

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  • (10/31/2012 4:38:00 PM)

    A few spelling and grammar mistakes, but ignoring that a clever little poem Akanksha.
    I can tell you are enjoying writing your poems, so keep on writing!
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  • (10/23/2012 3:41:00 AM)

    Another great poem, like it. (Report)Reply

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  • Sarojini Pattayat (10/19/2012 11:30:00 AM)

    good poem Akanksha. Built a strong passion.A poet should not confuse.read Yash's poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Sina Farajzadeh (10/17/2012 9:54:00 AM)

    Considering your age, it's really nice. Everybody is confused. When naturals seem unnatural, and unnaturals seem natural. Poetry is not a trick, it's just release. Good luck. (Report)Reply

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  • Philo Yan (10/17/2012 3:43:00 AM)

    This poem is a reflection of the conflicting thoughts that run through every teenage boys and girls. For one, it's your hormones raging but you have the intelligence to think it through and there you have the answer.

    Poetry verbalizes
    your thoughts
    your feelings
    on paper and in time
    it will clear the confusion
    in your mind.
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  • Aung Si (10/16/2012 11:51:00 PM)

    A resplendent collection of thoughts humorously penned down.I especially love third stanza.Well done! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • So Close (10/14/2012 10:36:00 PM)

    good job....!

    »so close»
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  • Elena Sandu (10/14/2012 8:16:00 AM)

    What a delight to read, I can guess the connection tries of heart with the mind, the difference kind of made me wonder: could a perfect balance help to get rid of confusion? Then there will be no more ups and downs, no emotions to give wings to a pen.. Could confusion be a good thing! Yes, I believe so, otherwise we would not have a poem written so nice! Thank you! (Report)Reply

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  • Unwritten Soul (10/12/2012 7:33:00 AM)

    This is awesome, i like the dimension you took to talk to self and bring your consciousness..sometimes you need your inner feeling and delivered by mind to stop confusion, it may needs time but you will learn it effectively in the future...your poem was nicely written, so keep it up okay_Soul (Report)Reply

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  • (10/11/2012 8:11:00 AM)

    I like the spiritual touch of your poem! A very mature poem for your age! (Report)Reply

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  • Poetheart Morgan (10/10/2012 6:35:00 PM)

    Poetry can gives to you all free that you still can not reach. Poetry is your true friend.
    And just to you know! ! ! And Yours questions are ours questions too! ! ! Beautiful poem! ! !
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  • Diane Hine (10/9/2012 6:33:00 AM)

    A very enjoyable trio of poems Akanksha- thank you! (Report)Reply

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  • Akanksha Bhatt (10/2/2012 10:08:00 AM)

    hello! poets and visitors! ! please also dropp your comments after reading my poems (Report)Reply

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  • Akanksha Bhatt (10/2/2012 9:56:00 AM)

    hello! visitors! ! please also dropp your comments after reading my poems! (Report)Reply

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  • Neetha Sasidharan (10/2/2012 1:36:00 AM)

    hey....cool poemm.....nice rhyme.....gud to know that guys of this age r coming up.....i too started writing at the age of 12.....u hv a gud future...come up.... (Report)Reply

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  • Ramesh Rai (10/1/2012 7:43:00 AM)

    in poetry there is no confusion. poetry evolves through emotion emitting from heart and in heart there should be no confusion. it is the reason you have created. good write. keep it up. (Report)Reply

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  • Indranil Bhaduri (10/1/2012 3:46:00 AM)

    Nice and sweetly written.. Like it a lot! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 30, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, October 1, 2012


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