Why Am I So Confused Poem by Akanksha Bhatt
Why Am I So Confused
Once I was getting very much bored
I asked my mind what to do dude
He said 'Sit quietly, doing nothing,
spring comes and the grass grows by itself'.
I was confused cuz I didn't understood.
Then what! I asked my heart the same one,
It said what can you do instead of that
which is present inside your soal,
which is present inside you girl!
I was confused cuz I didn't understood.
Then I thought of the poetry.
I wrote all my emotions,
which I'd never thought I could.
Poetry can be done by only few,
It is just a magic trick,
I've completed my three poems,
Vow! Its just a hat-trick.
Then I asked myself that
'Why I was so confused and
Why I didn't understood,
Why am I so confused? !
WHY AM I SO CONFUSED! ? ..
I like the spiritual touch of your poem! A very mature poem for your age!
This is awesome, i like the dimension you took to talk to self and bring your consciousness..sometimes you need your inner feeling and delivered by mind to stop confusion, it may needs time but you will learn it effectively in the future...your poem was nicely written, so keep it up okay_Soul
A resplendent collection of thoughts humorously penned down.I especially love third stanza.Well done! ! !
Haha that is so relatable with me . I wish I could write something like this. Great work👍.
It bubbles with Energy! im glad this Is the 1st of your poems I've read, it's a great introduction into you as a poet.
A few spelling and grammar mistakes, but ignoring that a clever little poem Akanksha. I can tell you are enjoying writing your poems, so keep on writing!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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