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Why Am I So Confused

Rating: 4.1
Once I was getting very much bored
I asked my mind what to do dude
He said 'Sit quietly, doing nothing,
spring comes and the grass grows by itself'.
I was confused cuz I didn't understood.

Then what! I asked my heart the same one,
It said what can you do instead of that
which is present inside your soal,
which is present inside you girl!
I was confused cuz I didn't understood.
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Prachi Rawal 20 September 2020
Haha that is so relatable with me . I wish I could write something like this. Great work??.
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Sandeep Dubey 28 May 2013
Nice.....U r not confused actually.. :) ..nice one.
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Sandy Player 04 January 2013
It bubbles with Energy! im glad this Is the 1st of your poems I've read, it's a great introduction into you as a poet.
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Sahil Sood 01 November 2012
Great poem.. I njoyed reading it.. Keep writing...
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Kevin Halls 31 October 2012
A few spelling and grammar mistakes, but ignoring that a clever little poem Akanksha. I can tell you are enjoying writing your poems, so keep on writing!
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Dave Walker 23 October 2012
Another great poem, like it.
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Sarojini Pattayat 19 October 2012
good poem Akanksha. Built a strong passion.A poet should not confuse.read Yash's poem.
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Sina Farajzadeh 17 October 2012
Considering your age, it's really nice. Everybody is confused. When naturals seem unnatural, and unnaturals seem natural. Poetry is not a trick, it's just release. Good luck.
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Philo Yan 17 October 2012
This poem is a reflection of the conflicting thoughts that run through every teenage boys and girls. For one, it's your hormones raging but you have the intelligence to think it through and there you have the answer. Poetry verbalizes your thoughts your feelings on paper and in time it will clear the confusion in your mind.
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Aung Si 16 October 2012
A resplendent collection of thoughts humorously penned down.I especially love third stanza.Well done! ! !
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