Wife's Retaliation.... Poem by Varsha M

Choose to be submissive Like a toy, but she becomes Ardhanareeswaran always. Fine poem Varsha

But even then she understands and respect And even though she can do many things Choose to be submissive to him Respecting his masculinity. a very clever wife who thinks and respects makes the life together a heaven. tony

Really a witty bit of verse set aside for deep reflective thought. An insightful piece of poetry written with conviction. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

Don't blame her that she had unfaithful intentions For she too is a being with flesh and blood fabrications And must have broken in the dearth of support she need But had nothing but haunting eyes that label her as bad. Marital relationships, its problems. love, care and concern. you have wonderfully written about it dear poetess. tony

To get your soul mate as your husband is of great luck. Otherwise, it is a dreary journey, full of remorse and regrets. Merely existing and tolerating each other as husband and wife is, indeed, a boring life. Your poem highlights the sorrow of many wives who have not known what true love is. Though a sad poem, Varsha, you have been honest in portraying the bitter truth. Heartiest Congratulations on your 499th poem, dear Varsha....5 Stars

But had nothing but haunting eyes that label her as bad.---- this poem is powerful in its impact---a five star poem for all to read

waow _ you should be celebrated for this piece _ it should be used in marriage seminars so inspiring and educational. Please do consider reading a few of mine like 'Power of Surrender'

Thank-you Indira ma'am for your wonderful review. It's really encouraging.

Very wonderful write....excellently remarkable poem...no one will disagree with what you have said.....inspiring...5*****

Yes if pushed against the wall such retaliation is bound to bounce back. You dealt the subject very sensibly and conveyed the message perfectly.5***