Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
Friday, September 14, 2012

Wild Love Comments

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Please God no more wild love
Fly away wild love like a dove
I will love like a flower
I will wait patience is power
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Kelvin Owusu 17 September 2012

another good piece nicely done

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Nurain Ali-balogun 17 September 2012

Girls like rare pearls on a necklace...good one. But is salt really sour? Lovely poem.

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Eric Cockrell 16 September 2012

our wings are charred by the passions of our hearts!

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Kathrin P. 16 September 2012

Please God no more wild love Fly away wild love like a dove... My favorite lines. Nice write.

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Stevie Taite 16 September 2012

Another passage into a new realm, where the necklace you wear lands the pendant on the skin above your hearts heart! Another pleasing little read and thanks for the invite!

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WOW thats was powerful braveness talking the neckad truth but it rare to people to talk about...good work keep it up

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Black On Black Arts 15 September 2012

very moving and passionate poem you are a talented writer

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Reyvrex Questor Reyes 15 September 2012

What a way to say these words. Expressive poem.

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Unwritten Soul 15 September 2012

Kelly sounds right but it just a poem kelly....your all poems sound great simple but catchy..you are a good formulator in your own poems_Unwritten Soul

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Kelly Seale 15 September 2012

you sound like you're a player? (Meant as a compliment) And have many women who finds you charming. 657 poems, my you're a busy writer. I enjoyed this one very much Asif, thank you for the invite! Your Friend, Kelly.

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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