Lyn Paul

Gold Star - 43,219 Points (17.03.1965 / Mt. Barker S.A)

Win The Battle - Poem by Lyn Paul

Read my words
Hear my voice
Understand in life...
There is a choice.

A choice to grow in life to succeed
Or a choice to burn
Just swallow and bleed

The power is yours
It's about never giving in
Fighting for life
You need to win

Winning is not the be all
Yet it is if you need to survive
And it is if you are feeling..
You are no longer alive

What is it that makes us strong
Then stronger each day
It is the beauty of life
No matter how grey along the way

Open up and share
Let everyone in
This is the way...
The way for us all to win

Win the Battle
Of the change of living as the world each day is to grow
The pure amazement of now..... Now and tomorrow

So grow and listen
To eachothers voices
Understand the need
To accept eachothers choices


Copyright Reserved May 2014

Topic(s) of this poem: believe, life, pain, survival, acceptance

Comments about Win The Battle by Lyn Paul

  • (6/26/2014 11:51:00 AM)

    Very inspiring and carries great message for all who are really sincere in caring and sharing others........... (Report)Reply

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  • Kanav Justa (12/10/2013 7:48:00 AM)

    So grow and listen to eachothers voices.
    Understand the need to accept eachothers choices

    so true, , , ,

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  • Unwritten Soul (5/11/2013 6:13:00 AM)

    We maybe not stand as soldiers but we are in the battlefield to fight the challenge in life, we feel pain but we can still just about how strong we are inside, we can WIN THE BATTLE Lyn..i like the spirit in you! _Soul (Report)Reply

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  • Ace Of Black Hearts (5/5/2013 6:19:00 PM)

    Communication is key, because if you don't understand how can you ever begin to try to accept somebody else's choice. (Report)Reply

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  • Valerie Dohren (5/5/2013 3:20:00 PM)

    We can't change the past, but we can mould tomorrow and turn the world into a better place. Very good Lyn. (Report)Reply

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  • David Wood (5/5/2013 10:01:00 AM)

    Your poem bounds along like a racer. It rhymes and is exciting and doesn't stop for breath. I like it.10/10 (Report)Reply

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  • Valsa George (5/5/2013 9:13:00 AM)

    This message has great relevance at a time when people withdraw to their own narrow shells. Opening up and showing the willingness to listen to and care for others makes life meaningful, no matter we win or lose the battle! Let this message ring from all corners! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Allen Steble (5/5/2013 8:52:00 AM)

    Very motivational poem, nicely done. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 5, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 5, 2017

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