Winter's Mystic Journey Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA

Winter's Mystic Journey

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Walking beside such railway lines,
We can see far mountains and forest,
Green scene is covered by mist of winter,
A hut inside forest is found near trees.

Journey of winter has brought up dream,
For us this is a nice experience to feel,
Mystic appearance of sunlight falls on,
Railway tracks pierce through mountains.

We are walking but waiting for the train,
This rare train will arrive and go away,
Foggy weather identifies journey of winter,
This mountain is crown of victory of scene.

We are fortunate to observe mystical winter,
This beautiful paradise keeps this shiny day,
To travel in eternal path of love and peace,
This season takes us frequently into trance.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,10 January 2018. All rights reserved.

Winter's Mystic Journey
Wednesday, January 10, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: journey,perception,season,winter
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,19 December 2017. All rights reserved.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muzahidul Reza 10 January 2018

Green scene is covered by mist of winter, is a great line can be used as great imagery, thanks for sharing the poem with us,10

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Akhtar Jawad 13 January 2018

A mystic journey in winter nicely described, an impressive poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 January 2018

We are walking but waiting for the train, This rare train will arrive and go away, Foggy weather identifies journey of winter, This mountain is crown of victory of scene....the beauty of winter journey is neatly depicted in this fascinating poem. Thanks dear sir for sharing!

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Feipeng Shang 14 January 2018

In winter Hope for spring......good piece!

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Mj Lemon 15 January 2018

A wonderful poem, Kumarmani. Indeed there is a great calming effect brought on by winter. This verse captures that...perfectly.

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Savita Tyagi 05 December 2018

Winter is here with all its grandure!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 August 2018

A beautiful prose poem that captures a fascinating train journey. A travel that allows you to see the beauty of nature brings happiness in our hearts. This is what is depicted in this wonderful piece of work. Very well presented and beautifully crafted.10++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 February 2018

Such railway lines! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Tom Allport 20 January 2018

a wonderful poem of the magic that surrounds us all of the time? .............well written Kumarmani

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Loke Kok Yee 20 January 2018

A journey of love and peace seen through the beauty of winter. the message is pleasantly imparted to the readers. Thank you

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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