Walking beside such railway lines,
We can see far mountains and forest,
Green scene is covered by mist of winter,
A hut inside forest is found near trees.
Journey of winter has brought up dream,
For us this is a nice experience to feel,
Mystic appearance of sunlight falls on,
Railway tracks pierce through mountains.
We are walking but waiting for the train,
This rare train will arrive and go away,
Foggy weather identifies journey of winter,
This mountain is crown of victory of scene.
We are fortunate to observe mystical winter,
This beautiful paradise keeps this shiny day,
To travel in eternal path of love and peace,
This season takes us frequently into trance.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,10 January 2018. All rights reserved.
A mystic journey in winter nicely described, an impressive poem.
We are walking but waiting for the train, This rare train will arrive and go away, Foggy weather identifies journey of winter, This mountain is crown of victory of scene....the beauty of winter journey is neatly depicted in this fascinating poem. Thanks dear sir for sharing!
A wonderful poem, Kumarmani. Indeed there is a great calming effect brought on by winter. This verse captures that...perfectly.
A beautiful prose poem that captures a fascinating train journey. A travel that allows you to see the beauty of nature brings happiness in our hearts. This is what is depicted in this wonderful piece of work. Very well presented and beautifully crafted.10++++
Such railway lines! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
a wonderful poem of the magic that surrounds us all of the time? .............well written Kumarmani
A journey of love and peace seen through the beauty of winter. the message is pleasantly imparted to the readers. Thank you
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Green scene is covered by mist of winter, is a great line can be used as great imagery, thanks for sharing the poem with us,10