- Heartfelt song lyrics, by Yiyan Han (c)2020-11-24
When I'm alone
my feeling's strong
Heard you say
don't carry away
But I can't help it
'cause my sleepless mind
When I'm alone
my feeling is strong
I'm despair
as you don't care
But I can't help it
'cause my longing mind
Wish you were here
when I'm alone
When I'm alone
my feeling's strong
When I'm alone
my feeling's strong
A nice song indeed. Loved the way you have expressed the feeling of loneliness. Thanks for sharing.
I think, I have forgotten to mention that I was referring to David Gilmour: the member of the famous progressive-rock band, 'Pink Floyd'.
Thank you very much, Mihaela, for your recommendation and your liking of my little piece :)
Pink Floyd...! He creates magic with his guitar! But, of course, there is Polly Samson (his wife) which composes the lyrics. Your lyrics are emotionally touching; I hope one day, you will find a musical composer for a wonderful collaboration!
A beautiful song that expresses the longings of the heart. When we are alone, it makes us vulnerable and we seek solace. A well crafted and expressed write.
Thank you, Rose Marie, for your encouragement. The heart desires beloved ones at times of loneliness, more so in this very year 2020 for many.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautifully written song. Indeed heartfelt. Thank-you.