With You I'll Grow Old... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan
With You I'll Grow Old...
With You I'll Grow Old...
Yes, honey, I'll grow old with you
until the west declamates peace in the east,
every weakest animal comforted by a wild beast,
until countless suns rise in the east,
and together we will become very gray with Reast,
(he is our oldest and most loyal servant)
Yes baby, I'll grow old with you
because when you love someone so true
nothing is there that shall regret you!
real love,
loyal love,
never ends,
never leaves you
though the ancient old twigs are severely bent,
our body and ev'rything very pain-blent
yes dear together we are getting very old
that is crystal clear
together we feel the earth shall be again very cold
our soul will be entwined,
our heart rhymes
still like precious old wine
our love is pure and precious
always up to date
never anxious
this love poem for you my dear
is very appropriate,
because you are my only love
and bedmate!
© Sylvia Frances Chan - All rights reserved
Thursday, November 26,2020
Thank you very much
gratefully yours,
© Sylvia Frances Chan
All Rights Reserved
A powerful declaration of great love. A wonderful tribute to a one and only love. So lovingly penned and so mellifluous when read. It expresses in beautiful detail an eternal and pure love.
" Yes baby, I'll grow old with you / because when you love someone so true / nothing is there that shall regret you! / real love, / loyal love, / never ends, ....so true and impressive. Really real love is eternal, it has no end. It is loyal and much impressive. You have so nicely delineated this poem which will be appreciated by all. Thank you. Full stars.
You have really excavated every thing and nicely placed every line to make a meaning resonate profound... thank-you for composing this....
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5/12/2024 12:40:26 AM # 1.0.0.1119
" Yes, baby, I'll grow old with you because when you love someone so true nothing is there that shall regret you! " Beautiful lines from a beautifully crafted poem of love. Five Stars.! ! ! !