Without Her Poem by Steven Pimentel

Without Her

Rating: 5.0

Dem i just met her
& i feel like she always been with me
the way that she moves
& the way she kiss me..

its hard to write this
when she is not with me
but she always in my mind
is like you kill her when you kill me..

we can never fight
& never argue..

she is like the sky
& i love her more
every time i see the star shoot..

baby i know you miss me
because right now i miss you ..

A T 11 July 2009

i like how you ended the poem... very good writing

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Melanie Guerrero 11 July 2009

: ] Love it Def. qreat poem Added to my fav.!

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Lola Hi 11 July 2009

nice romantinc poem.very good.

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the poem is good, i like the ending much...

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Blue Eyes 27 August 2009

u broke my already broken heart with ur words.

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Allan Macli Borges 25 July 2009

very nice poem, please read my 'about dama'.

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Omar Ibrahim 25 July 2009

she is like the sky! ! ! good expression and i liked the ending too!

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Anthony Han 19 July 2009

nice ending on your poem man

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Marieta Maglas 14 July 2009

nice poem, well penned with great ideas...10 from me

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