Without You! Poem by Sandra Feldman

Without You!

Rating: 5.0

I've lost
You,
And still
There are tears
That are not yet
Born!
Without you
And a World
That turns,
Without you,
And people that
Laugh, cry
And live,
When
I'm without you
And a World
That still turns,
While my heart,
Dies...
Without you!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 August 2024

A powerful poem on love that depicts the effect of a lost love. Beautiful poetic expressions that stir the heart. So poignant and touching.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 24 August 2024

This poem has touched my heart in a special way Bravo TFS

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 August 2024

Beautiful poem with deepest melancholy, sans toi, life cannot be lived, to MyFavourites

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 August 2024

without you a beautiful melancholic melody to a lover and to love without you life is empty and meaningless, beautifully worded. TOP Marks! I really enjoyed reading it, thank you so much for sharing, my dear Sandra.

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Rebecca Navarre 26 August 2024

Excellently expressed! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 26 August 2024

The world keeps spinning, while broken hearts feel they're fading from life! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 26 August 2024

Ever so moving and deeply heart felt! ..

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Richard Wlodarski 25 August 2024

I feel your pain, Poetess Friend! The cathartic effect of poetry is so very well conveyed through this poem!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 August 2024

Amazing and very touching opening lines!

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