Witness Poem by banamala sen

Witness

Rating: 5.0


Not sure when I started loving you.

Was it when we got up at dawn

to pick white Siuli flowers already on the ground?

And competed who picked more!

Was it when we shared books, and you read devotedly to

one captive listener?

And you adored the bookworm girl, and she thought, that was the best present ever!

Was it when we all were racing with our playful friends

and I fell, and on the verge of crying?

You stopped and wiped my tears!

It certainly was on an enchanting evening when we were sauntering back

from a musical, and in the dark gazed at the stars together.

We were too young to give a name to the feelings,

But the wide sky witnessed, the swaying trees witnessed,

the blinking stars witnessed us

Falling in love.

Saturday, April 7, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naila Rais 07 April 2018

A nice write... Keep it up.... I would like you read my poem LET ME RISE too.... Naila

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Ratan Ghosh 16 August 2019

Falling in love, witnessed by nature. What a beautiful expression of the feelings called love. Enjoyed reading this brilliant writing.

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Indira Renganathan 31 July 2019

With a beautiful witness of nature a lovely love and a lovely poem....thank you Banamala Sen

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Banamala Sen 01 August 2019

Thank You, Dear Indira. Your comments are extremely valuable to me!

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 09 April 2018

I would love to know your review on my poem After We Met and The Forgotten Kiss. Read them as and when you can afford time. Thanks.

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banamala sen 09 April 2018

Can I include you in my friend's list? Thanks.

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banamala sen 09 April 2018

Sure. I will read them and review. Thanks for asking. I am honoured.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 09 April 2018

We were too young to give a name to the feelings, But the wide sky witnessed, the swaying trees witnessed, the blinking stars witnessed us Falling in love. Wow Banamala, you have created a exhilarating world of love. So beautifully penned. 10++ for it.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 08 April 2018

Banamala, such a lovely poem??????

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Banamala Sen 08 April 2018

Thank you, thank you so much! So glad you liked it. I am new at PM, can I include you in my friend's list?

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