Woman,
Ceaseless tenderness, beauty and grace
Is your name
The chaotic world is held firm and steady
In your affectionate brace
With an everlasting need to love and give
To those around you
You exert yourself each passing day
Thus you die and thus you live
In the face of indifference and hate
Your undiminished fervor
Makes its mark on unheeding souls
Always, perhaps sometimes a little late
In the role of a daughter, wife and mother
Men and children look up to you
For inspiration, devotion and nurturing
For a heart of radiance, as a mankind’s lover
Woman,
Untiring labor, patience and deprivation
Is your name
In this cold world you carry on
The burden of compassionate feminine tradition
Really written with passion...is that your real age in your Biography? You are still young at heart..the heart of a woman
This is high praise indeed, for woman. As I read I like the rythm of this poem. The way that the rhyming scheme invites the reader to speed through the last three lines of each verse. Nice poem.10/10.
Motherhood is the divine blessing, no doubt abut it, but we the children did not understand and apreciate the proper way, both the boys and girls, Thanks for the very Important message to the society,10+++
I was certainly delighted to read this poem of yours and so thanks a lot for inviting me.You have skillfully presented some of the numerous admirable qualities of women, and this is in itself an epic achievement.There is a kind of Metaphisical images in your poem in which you tried to mix between two opposite things and yet made them sound as if they were harmonious, like when u said 'Thus you die and thus you live'.I do wish you succeed in your life and i hope you send me more invitations. Sincerely Yours
There is no man without a woman. The last three letters of the word woman is man. So, man is within the woman. Out of woman, motherhood is the greatest status God has given her. M.A. has brought out the role of woman very nicely.
Thank you Madam for your kind invite to read what I considered to be an absolutely enchanting write. and now I am going to read more... regards Alf
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice cognitive metaphor; ''The chaotic world is held firm and steady In your affectionate brace'' embedded in this wonderful elegy....10++ from me