Would I ponder, till my death...
How to pen, a while of breath!
Brief but meaningful and beautiful. Thoughtful and amazing write. Thanks for sharing.
Deep and great, this is a thoughtful and amazing way of expression.. Maybe because too much to tell, to much to express, we wait the perfect aura to rescue our poem to create a satisfying write that make us smile each time we work on something. And because we are artist of ideas so we are wanting best look as we could and it needs us to work more waiting for it to ripe. Nice poem dear
This is magnificent, Muhammad. Indeed, the writer's dilemma, the writer's mission. How is one to capture the ethereal? How does one give form to the eternally ephemeral? So much to think about- contained in just a few lines.
A succinct gem of a piece. Deep write. One of your best. A super 10.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Each time when a poem comes knocking at our mind's door, we wonder how to pen it to make it more appealing to our readers! In fact every poem is born out of some kind of a wonder and lucky are those who can sustain this wonder till the last breath!