World Of Wings Poem by Vijay Sai R

World Of Wings

Rating: 2.8


Sparrows sending sizzling sounds
Mynas making mesmerizing melodies
Crows calling fellows and feeding food
Parrots presenting in piquant pairs
Pigeons posing in pomp and pageantry
Kingfishers fishing in soak-pits
Woodpeckers pecking tree barks
Weaver birds weaving nests
Eagles circling coconut trees
Vultures venturing over dead rats
All these wonderful birds
Fly over my little kingdom-
A world of wings altogether!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adam Reed 02 March 2010

OK lol The alliteration is even better than in little kingdom. Well played sir lol :)

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Gautam Sen 25 February 2010

Hi, I read it. It's really a definite angle covered that is the group of birds of different species - in your term it's really a world of wings. Good way to think. Much emphasis given on alliteration I find. Thanks for sharing. Gautam.

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Steven S 25 February 2010

Vijay... what can I say about this flighty poem... it is for the birds! Thanks for inviting me to read it.

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Richelle Barrameda 21 February 2010

I like it... a lot! :)

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Jihene Khammassi 20 February 2010

What is this poem! I myself caan call it ' world of wings, world of consonances'. what musicality u embeded in ur poem! i did really enjoy reading it and looking forward to read other new poems!

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Benjamin Tetteh 23 September 2015

Nice poem. I wonder where you were sitting when you were writing this poem. Were you behind the TV set

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Fantastic flow of words ascribed to a world of wings as sweet and darling creatures of Nature...................Vijay very nice

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 21 April 2014

Wonderful wrap up on cricket world. I appreciate your style of penning thoughts. I read all of them.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 13 December 2011

The flight of your imagery is really wonderful and it has captured the song of avions life.A good write-up. Thanks for sharing. Ratnakar Mandlik

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Gan Chennai 24 May 2010

One day Man also may get wings! May be Millions of years from Now!

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Vijay Sai R

Vijay Sai R

Trichy, South India
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