Dee Daffodil


Would You Do It? - Poem by Dee Daffodil

Would you?
Could you?
Tell me that-
you know...

Would you dare?
If you thought,
That I might-
You know...!

If it meant a 'yes' or 'no',
Would you do it?
'Cause chances are-
If you did...

You'd watch me go...

(1982 by Dee Daffodil H.W)


Comments about Would You Do It? by Dee Daffodil

  • (7/17/2008 12:39:00 PM)

    Don't know why I hadn't seen this one before. It has a Dr. Suess feel, but with a much deeper meaning/tension/implication to it. -c (Report)Reply

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  • Melvina Germain (3/10/2007 9:44:00 AM)

    Well, there ya go, that wonderful creative mind at work yet once again. You go girl.---Melvina--- (Report)Reply

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  • (7/24/2006 1:17:00 AM)

    Ya I'll shut up don't go? dave (Report)Reply

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  • Brian Dorn (6/7/2006 10:54:00 AM)

    Well, I'd hate to see you go... soooo, I guess I wouldn't. Cool poem, Dee! !
    Brian
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  • (6/5/2006 5:43:00 AM)

    Yeah, knowing me I probably would! Seriously though, great poem - a masterful use of language.
    Hugs
    Anna xxx
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  • (6/4/2006 5:35:00 AM)

    You have placed the reader in the middle of a quandry and the feeling came straight across
    to us, like a rocket, whoooooooosh great job 10, without fail Love Duncan x
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  • (6/4/2006 1:05:00 AM)

    FJR Jr says it all..... (Report)Reply

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  • (6/1/2006 3:08:00 PM)

    Once again...amazing poem! Such few words but said so well...

    Love,
    Valsa
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (5/31/2006 10:43:00 PM)

    DEE...2 WORDS MY DEAR; YOU ROCK!

    ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
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  • (5/31/2006 10:22:00 PM)

    Great read and a good interesting poem.
    Keep writing,
    Rissa: -)
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 31, 2006



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