Would You Do It? Poem by Dee Daffodil

Would You Do It?

Rating: 5.0


Would you?
Could you?
Tell me that-
you know...

Would you dare?
If you thought,
That I might-
You know...!

If it meant a 'yes' or 'no',
Would you do it?
'Cause chances are-
If you did...

You'd watch me go...

(1982 by Dee Daffodil H.W)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Great read and a good interesting poem. Keep writing, Rissa: -)

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DEE...2 WORDS MY DEAR; YOU ROCK! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

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Valsa Terron 01 June 2006

Once again...amazing poem! Such few words but said so well... Love, Valsa

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FJR Jr says it all.....

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Duncan Wyllie 04 June 2006

You have placed the reader in the middle of a quandry and the feeling came straight across to us, like a rocket, whoooooooosh great job 10, without fail Love Duncan x

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Chuck Audette 17 July 2008

Don't know why I hadn't seen this one before. It has a Dr. Suess feel, but with a much deeper meaning/tension/implication to it. -c

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Melvina Germain 10 March 2007

Well, there ya go, that wonderful creative mind at work yet once again. You go girl.---Melvina---

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David Darbyshire 24 July 2006

Ya I'll shut up don't go? dave

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Brian Dorn 07 June 2006

Well, I'd hate to see you go... soooo, I guess I wouldn't. Cool poem, Dee! ! Brian

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Anna Russell 05 June 2006

Yeah, knowing me I probably would! Seriously though, great poem - a masterful use of language. Hugs Anna xxx

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