I wanted something
Eastern European, you know,
something portentous
in the best sense of the word,
but what I managed was
two lines of Southwestern
animal husbandry, half
a simile comparing
something wet to a teaser
stallion on a stud farm
& I was too busy
to mention the sow bugs
in the shower stall,
which echoed like a school
for famous readers.
Jefferson, The 'sow bugs' echoed with 'bed bugs' in a Moscow flophouse, so you bridged the gap. And the showers in the East are most memorable. Five star poem. John
the endeavour of writing finally closing the curtains with a big bang........marvellous write JC.
your poetic lines set down here and there, weaving a spiderweb of images in the corner of your shower stall. wonderful - -chuck
nicely written, goes off then draws the reder in with a poetic meaningful line then continues the pattern. over all letting the reader think and muddle through the lines and message.
Life " echoes like a school for famous readers."… good one.
I wish someone tells me what this is all about? At least Mr.Carter! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I smiled from reading the title to the end of the poem. Great write!