Aufie Zophy

Gold Star - 19,293 Points (18 October 1964)

Y.... Hard Is The Fall - Poem by Aufie Zophy

Wise persons tend to be really humble ones
No matter how wise or what they have done
They tend to realize their limitations

But oh, how difficult it can be
To maintain our humility
Challenges are often so plenty

Any achievement, be it professional
Material or educational
Religious or recreational

All are pushing us into a feeling of superiority
Yes here we are, here are we, look at me
Look at me, I am better than you, really!

We stand tall on this high and narrow pedestal
We feel superior, better than all
But invariably, hard is the fall.

Humility
Poise, humility
Modesty, humbleness, humility…


Comments about Y.... Hard Is The Fall by Aufie Zophy

  • (4/21/2012 3:29:00 AM)


    Any achievement, be it professional,
    How true you are! but in reality, there are various factors that we should have, Nice poem to remember and learn, as life is the process of continuous learning!
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  • Raj Arumugam (4/11/2012 4:39:00 AM)


    Well, let's do it because one loves it.... (Report) Reply

  • (3/26/2012 11:58:00 PM)


    Beautiful composition..... it is very hard to be humble and.avoid the feeling of superiority.......
    .We stand tall on this high and narrow pedestal
    We feel superior, better than all
    But invariably, hard is the fall.
    ......beautiful lines and aptly said.
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  • Martin O'Neill (3/19/2012 10:02:00 AM)


    I am reminded of a wonderfully funny song called 'Oh Lord it's hard being Humble, when you're perfect in every way! ' sung by Mac Davis. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (3/18/2012 10:51:00 AM)


    As long as we stay sober within sanity we will always be guided by humility....whatever it is, it exist in each person we only need to use mind because that's the level that humility has compare to other creation level ability...I know it's hard to be wise because of many challenges, but if we can have it in most time mean we are having the best wise level...the harder the wiser it ranked but it be more difficult to attain... but at least we must try to maintain what we can _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul (3/17/2012 10:57:00 AM)


    ''But invariably, hard is the fall.'' though the whole is the pack of wisdom, i like this the best, a great poem indeed! (Report) Reply

  • Ekaterina M. Polischuk (3/15/2012 2:49:00 PM)


    good poem with a great meaning.... it gives us information to think about... (Report) Reply

  • (3/15/2012 9:12:00 AM)


    Modestly teaching the world: -) I pray everyone to understand this truth of life with utmost humility! I must give 10+ (Report) Reply

  • (3/10/2012 9:18:00 AM)


    A most superb poem! Your work here is superb and brilliant! Thank you very much (Report) Reply

  • (3/9/2012 6:06:00 PM)


    Humility, humbleness is like honey...sincerity it's sweetness, ...humility and sincerity together...best medicine for body and soul! Very beautiful poem my friend...a great 10. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 8, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, March 9, 2012


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