Aufie Zophy

Gold Star - 19,191 Points (18 October 1964)

Y/. New Me - Poem by Aufie Zophy

An almost perfect silence
embraces my body, heart and soul

A whispering fountain of sparks
illuminates my inner thoughts

Herbs of love are sprinkled
on the plainness of my hungry ego

A perfect silence,
light and love
A new me emerges

Topic(s) of this poem: silence

Poet's Notes about The Poem

On the renewing energy of silence

Comments about Y/. New Me by Aufie Zophy

  • Terry Craddock (1/3/2017 4:12:00 PM)

    every image is profoundly beautiful and exhilerating, blessing my day (Report) Reply

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  • Daniel Brick (5/25/2014 4:08:00 PM)

    Silence can be boring or exhilarating, it can be terrifying or illuminating. Thanks to your poem our minds can contemplate only its positive aspects safely and freely. You wrote this poem in March, which in my part of the world includes the beginning of spring. I mention that because this is the epitome of a SPRING POEM. It signals a new season for the heart and mind with quiet hope. It's not exaggerating the possibilities, just reminding us that the silence within us holds hope for those who seek it. This poem is truly a gift to your readers, a kind of parallel to the gifts to others you found in my ONE TRUE DREAM. (Report) Reply

  • (4/10/2014 9:14:00 PM)

    Yes, it is in silence..that we discover the gem in us, the hidden spark and often the wisdom in happenings!
    Lov your poem sufi bro! 10
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  • Yash Shinde (4/8/2014 11:26:00 PM)

    ............Silence helps us accumulate power.............
    A perfect silence
    of light and love
    A new me emerges....the most beautiful lines of this write.........
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  • (3/15/2014 1:09:00 PM)

    A free verse rendition that gets to the very essence of our being. Brief and revealing- An
    excellant write with metaphoric mysteries
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  • Valerie Dohren (3/15/2014 5:53:00 AM)

    We are reborn in silence - lovely, thought-provoking write Aufie. (Report) Reply

  • S.zaynab Kamoonpuri (3/14/2014 10:35:00 AM)

    A great poem in brill metaphor. Now i undrstand why yor name is Aufie zophie after the great arab astronomer. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 14, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, April 13, 2015

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