You Are Astounding! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Neha Aradhye
You Are Astounding! ! ! ! ! !
I just want to feel your presence,
I wanna see that incontrovertible innocence..
in your eyes that makes me so COMPLETE,
& your dainty-benevolent touch synthesize in me, a musical beat,
rhythmical, harmonious & sweet,
and that's the reason why you exist in my every heartbeat....
;)
...in your eyes that makes me so COMPLETE... sounds so romantic! Thanks for sharing your lovely thoughts...
When the beat stops...........we die.Good rhythm Neha!
Neha... u write so amazingly impressive, with simplicity of words and rhythmic lines.. this one is so musical dat even your reference to ur heartbeats seems like some music.
The Word COMPLETE has got a lot of meanings...great work chap...
Dear Neha, Outstanding I would say for You are astounding, , , , Short & sweet....loved very much...keep it up dear! ! -geets
wow...he certainly must be astounding..... wonderfully expressed friend, khup avadlee tujhi poem, thanks
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4/18/2024 8:38:37 PM # 1.0.0.1119
What fine little poem I liked it very much a