You Are Astounding! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Neha Aradhye

You Are Astounding! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 5.0


I just want to feel your presence,
I wanna see that incontrovertible innocence..

in your eyes that makes me so COMPLETE,
& your dainty-benevolent touch synthesize in me, a musical beat,
rhythmical, harmonious & sweet,
and that's the reason why you exist in my every heartbeat....

;)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wayne Peterson 03 December 2008

I really like your poem!

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Kesav Easwaran 03 December 2008

astounding heart beat...can hear its symphony, sweet...expressive lovely write, Neha...10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 03 December 2008

Really a heart felt expression. did well.

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Lynda Robson 03 December 2008

A heartfelt poem, written with love, 10 Lynda xx

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Reshma Ramesh 02 December 2008

lovely love poem.....well penned

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Unique experience of love; quite poetic

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Kaushik C 16 December 2008

The Word COMPLETE has got a lot of meanings...great work chap...

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Geeta Nair 12 December 2008

Dear Neha, Outstanding I would say for You are astounding, , , , Short & sweet....loved very much...keep it up dear! ! -geets

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 09 December 2008

wow...he certainly must be astounding..... wonderfully expressed friend, khup avadlee tujhi poem, thanks

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Gargi Saha 09 December 2008

a WONDERFUL romantic poem. u get 10++.........

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