Neha Aradhye

You Are Astounding! ! ! ! ! !

I just want to feel your presence,
I wanna see that incontrovertible innocence..

in your eyes that makes me so COMPLETE,
& your dainty-benevolent touch synthesize in me, a musical beat,
rhythmical, harmonious & sweet,
and that's the reason why you exist in my every heartbeat....

;)

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 2, 2008

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  • Kaushik C (12/16/2008 3:24:00 AM)

    The Word COMPLETE has got a lot of meanings...great work chap...

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  • Geeta Nair (12/12/2008 8:35:00 AM)

    Dear Neha,
    Outstanding I would say for You are astounding, , , ,
    Short & sweet....loved very much...keep it up dear! ! -geets

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  • Sarvesh Kulkarni (12/9/2008 7:31:00 AM)

    wow...he certainly must be astounding.....
    wonderfully expressed friend,
    khup avadlee tujhi poem,
    thanks

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  • Gargi Saha (12/9/2008 12:37:00 AM)

    a WONDERFUL romantic poem. u get 10++.........

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  • Wayne Peterson (12/3/2008 9:50:00 AM)

    I really like your poem!

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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (12/3/2008 8:16:00 AM)

    astounding heart beat...can hear its symphony, sweet...expressive lovely write, Neha...10

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  • Sathyanarayana M V SSathyanarayana M V S (12/3/2008 5:32:00 AM)

    Really a heart felt expression. did well.

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  • Lynda Robson (12/3/2008 5:26:00 AM)

    A heartfelt poem, written with love,
    10
    Lynda xx

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  • Reshma Ramesh (12/2/2008 11:04:00 PM)

    lovely love poem.....well penned

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  • Dhanesh Aradhye (12/2/2008 9:00:00 PM)

    Neha...
    u write so amazingly impressive, with simplicity of words and rhythmic lines..
    this one is so musical dat even your reference to ur heartbeats seems like some music.

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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (12/2/2008 7:34:00 PM)

    When the beat stops...........we die.Good rhythm Neha!

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  • Deependra Kumar Jha (12/2/2008 6:08:00 PM)

    ...in your eyes that makes me so COMPLETE...
    sounds so romantic! Thanks for sharing your lovely thoughts...

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  • Pamela Lutwyche (12/2/2008 1:33:00 PM)

    What fine little poem I liked it very much a

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