You Are Love Poem by louis rams

You Are Love

Rating: 5.0


like the wind blown rain beating against your face
cooling you, soothing you, without leaving a trace.
so is the love that i have for you
and to you my heart will be true.

love is like a rose and it must be planted
carefully, nurtured, and constantly checked
for anything that can eat away at, or destroy it.
it is spoken to and constantly cleansed
so that it can grow strong and beautiful.

so is this love that i have for you.
'i will'- like the rose, nurture, cleanse
and always check to ensure that it can not
be touched by anything that can destroy its beauty.

just like the rain strenghtens the foundations
of all living plants.
my love grows with every fiber of my being
for this is what i'm seeing.

you are my foundation and the reason that i exist
every time i touch you, and every passionate kiss.
you are ' love' in every shape and form
and that's how you belong.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2009

you are my foundation and the reason that i exist every time i touch you, and every passionate kiss. you are ' love' in every shape and form and that's how you belong.....so much passin and kindness in each words of poet. it is beating to every tune of love... very good i mquaite impressed....10 read mine miss i miss u.... all drams not come true..mary to marry

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Kranthi Pothineni 14 May 2009

A nice poem on love and its passion. Good one.

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so um, what have you been up to? who stealing yoiure heart. such is only written out of experience. yay you!

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Kesav Easwaran 12 May 2009

good write, Louis...i liked the honesty sincerity and the richness of your love your poem carries inside...thanks...10

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