You Are My Moon Poem by Nosheen Irfan

You Are My Moon

Rating: 5.0


Your face lights up my way
Far though it be
Its radiance reaches me
Breaking all chains
Only in loving you
I enjoy a freedom
A complete freedom
That elevates my soul
And puts to sleep
My inner riot
I strive to reach
Into the arms of your light
With a passion
That no darkness can dim.

Saturday, February 10, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,love,moon
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nudershada Cabanes 10 February 2018

Love is a light that brightens our life. Beautiful poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 10 February 2018

Beauty leads to love, love leads to God, God leads to light, and light leads to beauty. A great poetess like Nosheen Irfan is wel aware of this cycle. It's a great poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 February 2018

Only in loving you! ! Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Wow! Wow! Wonderful! Inspiration at it eloquent best. Well done my friend!

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Valsa George 20 March 2018

I strive to reach Into the arms of your light With a passion That no darkness can dim. To us this source of light may be God or someone whom we keep so close to our heart! Though the light is shining far away, its brilliance can reach up to our life and make it bright! Indeed, Love is light illuminating all surroundings and dispelling darkness. A very passionate write, so beautifully rendered!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 December 2022

An endearing poem. Loved it

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Bharati Nayak 17 October 2018

Your face lights up my way Far though it be Its radiance reaches me Breaking all chains Only in loving you I enjoy a freedom- - - - An amazing write about the power of love- - - -'Moon' is symbol of love for all artists and lovers.

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Daniel Brick 16 October 2018

In ancient times the Moon was the highest mortal object: above the moon were the perfects spheres, the saints and angels, the throne of God. Below the moon we live in alternating darkness and light, with good and evil both assailing us. But - BUT your poem floods this vexed existence with H-O-P-E in the truth of human love You've made me a believer! ! !

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Now to be entered into my poem list!

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A rich river of romance that shines like the moon...

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Nosheen Irfan

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Lahore, Pakistan
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