You Are Not Away Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

You Are Not Away

Rating: 4.9


My strain to reach you turns fruitful
You are not away, no more away now
You are the dawn that knocks at my door
And wakes me up to the bright sunny day
In the guise of a breeze you chime the bell
And hug me dearly when I open the door
You flutter and chirp as little sparrows
Then I realise you are at my windows
My vision lacks such power to spot you
And that strength to prostrate in adoration

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Need not go far away in search of God's love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suresh Kumar Ek 04 September 2020

good poem about seperation

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Thank you very much dear poet Suresh Kumar. God and his love is everywhere. We are, in a way, wiseless to waste time searching it when it stays very close to us

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 November 2023

CONT: He already knows what you want to say, yes He is omnipotent. I really enjoyed your poem, beautiful metaphors.5 Stars.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 November 2023

God doesn't ask you what you can't do yet, but He accepts what you can do like this, if you believe in God, you will notice that you are always rewarded, What you have not yet expressed,

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 November 2023

Each and every line stands out. Top Marks and to my favorites.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 November 2023

A magnificent poem depicting the great love of our Lord Almighty. Very heartwarming and inspiring with superb imagery.

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Bharati Nayak 05 September 2020

You are the dawn that knocks at my door And wakes me up to the bright sunny day In the guise of a breeze you chime the bell And hug me dearly when I open the door You flutter and chirp as little sparrows Then I realise you are at my windows- - - An exquisitely beautiful poem !

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Thank you very much dear Bharati Nayak. Its a bliss to realise that God is watching us always, sometimes in disguise. He is Omnipresent

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