Your Love And Me Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Your Love And Me

Rating: 5.0


Every song I hear in the nature
Is a praise of thy everlasting love
I tune my strings to the music
Of the nightingale's melancholic solo

I am a penancing oyster
For a dew drop of your love
To fall into my depths
And to form a gleaming beautiful pearl

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 April 2020

The superb imagery of this write puts music to the hearts of readers. So mellifluous when read. Beautifully written.

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Thanki you dear poetess. Melody and beauty are the two abstracts that draw us to them even if we are not serious about them

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Savita Tyagi 02 April 2020

This poetic yearning for love is so sublime and compelling in its beauty. Really a lovely poem.

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Thank you Savitaji.for the comments that makes me satisfied

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 March 2020

Poetic beauty flowing bank to bank in two quatrains.

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Thank you very much Pathakji for this elating comment which gives a new energy and confidence

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Mahtab Bangalee 26 March 2020

Beautiful loving poem penned/// well expressed

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Thank you very much Mahtab. Whenever I am set to think about the love of God my heart gets filled with such verses. When you call it beautiful I am delighted

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 March 2020

A magnificent poem sir! The fourth line of your first stanza augments the beauty of this endearing little piece of poetry.......10/10

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Thank you very much Dr.Dillip. We are all His nightingales singing His praises, perhaps, in solos

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