You swept me away
took me in arms sway
gazedly we searched
dare i say,
that single dropp of pearl.
From the corner of your eye swirled
when fell soft on me
and gently it evoked
our long lost desires revoked
when fur Elise
fills sombre air
30-01-2009
P.S. For Elise is a famous piano solo by Ludwig van Beethoven (1770 - 1827)
I s he so powerful to sweep..you away.... I like the title.
Great poems, short sweet and completed with the influence of the classical piece fur elise. Great write! Thanks for the invite
Anjali this had me dancing to the tune...swept away..beautiful in its simplistic power...Alf
Wonderful short poems, passionate write and witty composition. Amazingly your feelings. 10+++ with pleasure.
How romantic! A true lover can only compose so touchy lines. Thanks
ANJU, IT'S A GREAT LOVE POEM. LIKE SHAKESPEARE, YOU PROVE YOUR VERSATILITY. YOU ARE A GENIUS OF GENIUS, I BOW DOWN MY HEAD BEFORE YOU.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I s he so powerful to sweep..you away.... I like the title.