Your Face Poem by Colin Ian Jeffery

wow, whoever this was written for is lucky. it really tells of the love and feeling without being to mushy. its really sweet.

This is very fine indeed - you have attempted a difficult subject (by that I mean the much overworked theme of intimate relations) and managed to avoid the minefield of cliche and sentimentality that usually accompanies it with a robust but uncomprimising language that seems to come from the very heart. Well done! dsw

I assume anyone could fall in love just reading such sweet words...only the loved person's face could have such a wonderful effect on the one in love... Lilly

that's how one would love to be loved....

Beautiful poem. ...thats all i can say

Making absent spring bloom......loved it lovely write

Lovely write making absent spring bloom... Loved it....

Lovely love poem, real nice poetic lines that looped nicely to the next line.

this is such a sweet poem. i like it.

Beautiful poem that reminds me of myself...thank you...