M. Asim Nehal

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Your Growth! ! ! - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

I asked you to endorse my love
By holding my hands
And not by chaining my soul

I wanted to show you that love
Is not slavery of mind and body
But is the security and assurance

I longed to teach you that kisses aren’t
Contracts to fulfil
But is a desire to enjoy

Finally, you learned that even the sunshine
Burns if you get too much
And soul needed decoration by heart.

In my teaching and your learning
I see you grow by the grace of an adult
And not the grief of a child.

Topic(s) of this poem: learning, life, love and life, wisdom

Form: Triversen


Comments about Your Growth! ! ! by M. Asim Nehal

  • Edward Kofi Louis (11/6/2016 12:15:00 PM)

    Assurance
    Security! ! Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • (2/10/2016 2:35:00 PM)


    Thoughtful poem........................10 (Report) Reply

  • (11/15/2015 11:31:00 AM)


    Indeed a brilliant poem, endorsement of love by holding hand and then teaching about kisses, neatly built very crafty poem Asim, Thanks for sharing it. You made my day. (Report) Reply

  • Souren Mondal (11/14/2015 7:08:00 AM)


    Yes, wisdom is something that takes us beyond sulking and towards a better life of acceptance and letting go.. Thank you for sharing Asim.. (Report) Reply

  • (11/14/2015 3:46:00 AM)


    your lesson is well written
    thanks-10
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/14/2015 2:48:00 AM)


    Life is filled with love. Showing love from inner heart is very interesting definitely. Very nicely penned...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 14, 2015



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