Your Smile Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Your Smile

Rating: 5.0


your smile holds me…
as the morning sunshine,
taking the world in its arms

your smile caresses me…
as the evening breeze
loitering along the seashore
to hug the leaping waves

your smile begins from the heart
and spreads across your face
like glittery ripples
sweeping over the river

in its warmth I melt
till I'm no more myself.

Nosheen Irfan © 2017

Friday, July 7, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love,smile
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barry Middleton 08 July 2017

Lovely. I wish the whole world had that kind of smile. I guess we all must do our part.

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Edmund Strolis 08 July 2017

And within such admiring eyes is awakened an end to a journey. A clear fresh day like those in distant Childhood. Such carefree beauty and a reawakening of a heart in blissful serenity.

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Akhtar Jawad 08 July 2017

A beautiful poem on smile............................................................................

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 July 2017

It is a beautiful poem on smile having nice penmanship. Smile is the key of the heart and door of the love. I appreciate this poem. Thank you dear Nosheen for posting this valuable poem....10

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Susan Williams 11 July 2017

This poem holds me! ! ! ! What beautiful soothing images flow from line to line- - - - as the morning sunshine, taking the world in its arms- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -has anybody ever penned a better pair of lines than this? I just melt every time I read this............. girl, you have definitely staked your place in poetry with this! ! ! ! ! 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++ and on my fav list so I can read this beauty again and again

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Wow! It reads even better the second time! Elegantly and excellently expressed!

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Added to my poem list. Thanks Nosheen!

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Simply sublime! Wow!

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Bharati Nayak 21 July 2017

your smile begins from the heart and spreads across your face like glittery ripples sweeping over the river in its warmth I melt till I'm no more myself. - - - - - - - - An absolutely lovely poem- - - - Love is viewed both in worldly and spiritual sense- - - - -It starts with individual but spreads to merge with universal as we can find love in nature - - in the sunshine, on the ripples of river water, evening breeze of sea shore and the individual melts into that warm feeling.

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Norah Tunney 21 July 2017

I want to dissolve into that smile Nosheen till I am no more. I love the picture you paint especially the second verse -the breeze loitering along the seashore. What a great word loitering especially in this context. So so uplifting! ! !

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Nosheen Irfan

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