your smile holds me…
as the morning sunshine,
taking the world in its arms
your smile caresses me…
as the evening breeze
loitering along the seashore
to hug the leaping waves
your smile begins from the heart
and spreads across your face
like glittery ripples
sweeping over the river
in its warmth I melt
till I'm no more myself.
Nosheen Irfan © 2017
And within such admiring eyes is awakened an end to a journey. A clear fresh day like those in distant Childhood. Such carefree beauty and a reawakening of a heart in blissful serenity.
A beautiful poem on smile............................................................................
It is a beautiful poem on smile having nice penmanship. Smile is the key of the heart and door of the love. I appreciate this poem. Thank you dear Nosheen for posting this valuable poem....10
This poem holds me! ! ! ! What beautiful soothing images flow from line to line- - - - as the morning sunshine, taking the world in its arms- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -has anybody ever penned a better pair of lines than this? I just melt every time I read this............. girl, you have definitely staked your place in poetry with this! ! ! ! ! 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++ and on my fav list so I can read this beauty again and again
Wow! It reads even better the second time! Elegantly and excellently expressed!
Added to my poem list. Thanks Nosheen!
your smile begins from the heart and spreads across your face like glittery ripples sweeping over the river in its warmth I melt till I'm no more myself. - - - - - - - - An absolutely lovely poem- - - - Love is viewed both in worldly and spiritual sense- - - - -It starts with individual but spreads to merge with universal as we can find love in nature - - in the sunshine, on the ripples of river water, evening breeze of sea shore and the individual melts into that warm feeling.
I want to dissolve into that smile Nosheen till I am no more. I love the picture you paint especially the second verse -the breeze loitering along the seashore. What a great word loitering especially in this context. So so uplifting! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lovely. I wish the whole world had that kind of smile. I guess we all must do our part.