poet Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Your Words Of Love

I have seemingly missed your words of love,
Those words that were written in the sand
And erased by the first wave.
Do you remember, my love?
I have enclosed them hermetically
With that last kiss.
And, after that,
Another kiss
And another exotic beach
And another feeling, autumnal feeling,
Of another ostensible seemingly love
Fulfilled my nothingness...
Among corals and shells,
Dried by the winds of the sea,
I awake in following my lost steps,
Taken by the waves
And redirected to the great unknown in the sea,
That great eternal.....
I still love you,
I love you more, miss you more.
Yes, I still miss you
And I realize that all I can do now
Is to lodge near the moan of the sea sand,
Which feels like a silk slipped worn-out dress,
When I touch it.
And slantingly I elect the oblivion,
When
I want to kiss again and again
Your gray-haired temple,
But, in reverting, I receive only
The kiss of our child...

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 8, 2009
Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 14, 2013

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  • Robert Murray SmithRobert Murray Smith (9/16/2020 6:37:00 PM)

    A great and imaginative love poem.

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  • Sachidananda PandaSachidananda Panda (7/23/2020 11:16:00 AM)

    it's exquisitely woven with love and care... moments of memory carefully preserved between lines... the longing... and the disheartening reality... combined together makes it a unique composition... Thanks

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  • James MclainJames Mclain (11/8/2019 6:07:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem he must be a lucky man.

    James McLain 🎸

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  • Castellenas JohnCastellenas John (4/8/2019 7:42:00 PM)

    A wonderful poem shared Marieta. I enjoyed the poem.

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  • Castellenas JohnCastellenas John (3/8/2019 4:07:00 PM)

    Wonderful poetry for love.

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  • Indira rice (7/7/2018 12:18:00 PM)

    So beautiful. How I adore these types of emotions. So glad this showed up unexpectedly.

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  • Narayanan Kutty PozhathNarayanan Kutty Pozhath (4/30/2018 11:59:00 PM)

    Very passionate words about a lost love. Beautiful lines.

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  • Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan (4/10/2018 8:21:00 AM)

    Amazingly rendered, true mesmerizing poetry, I love Love poems, and love this more than words can tell you.
    You have shown your weak side, Marieta! BUT that is the truest side of all of us! A most adorable poem. A 10 for the Voting. Thank you for sharing!

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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (4/10/2018 5:15:00 AM)

    A lovely poem, thoroughly romantic! Loved the way you have expressed words of love! I don't think it could have been penned better than what it is now in it's current form! If I find time, I would certainly revisit this beautiful piece of work to review the structure of the poem and point out further implications!

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  • Subhas Chandra ChakraSubhas Chandra Chakra (3/25/2018 5:22:00 AM)

    A wonderful piece of love lorn poem that amazes the heart and penetrates deep within.
    Thanks for the sharing.

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  • Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan (5/17/2017 6:04:00 AM)

    Amazing words of love. Gorgeous write.

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  • Chinedu DikeChinedu Dike (1/27/2017 8:08:00 PM)

    Beautiful love poem elegantly brought forth in good diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

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  • Dipankar SadhukhanDipankar Sadhukhan (12/7/2016 3:51:00 PM)

    An excellent poem of love my dear. I am really in love with this poem. ++++++++++10

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  • Nilima DebNilima Deb (7/9/2016 7:35:00 AM)

    a stunning write..great...loved the waves of wording..excellent.

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  • Subhas Chandra ChakraSubhas Chandra Chakra (4/12/2016 5:40:00 AM)

    I have seemingly missed your words of love,
    Those words that were written in the sand
    And erased by the first wave.
    Do you remember, my love?
    I have enclosed them hermetically
    With that last kiss.
    And, after that,
    Another kiss
    And another exotic beach
    And another feeling, autumnal feeling,
    Of another ostensible seemingly love
    Fulfilled my nothingness...
    Beautiful lines reflecting your love so deep and so rare.

    I want to kiss again and again
    Your gray-haired temple,
    But, in reverting, I receive only
    The kiss of our child...
    I loved these lines.
    Thanks for sharing this nice poem.
    Subhas

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (9/17/2015 4:24:00 AM)

    Another kiss! With the muse of life and love. Nice piece.

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  • Ramesh RaiRamesh Rai (7/15/2015 9:34:00 AM)

    Kisses of child are purer than purest.Such kisses are heavenly blessings which have no part. Very touching and emotional write. Thanks for sharing.

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  • Daniel BrickDaniel Brick (6/23/2015 10:41:00 AM)

    This is an intense, heartfelt poem in which you are speaking to a part of yourself, the bereft, still longing part that can't or won't heal the wound of love. Why not? I'm no expert in the Art of Love, just a foot soldier in the Army of Amours, but it seems to me if the wound was healed you would have severed all hope, and your soul cannot face that prospect yet. There are degrees of pain and this pain of unrequited love is still bearable but the pain of lost love is too traumatic to deal with in the time-frame of the poem. I read the many comments on this poem. The last one by Ibrar Siddiqi is especially poignant and must make you proud to have written this poem. It has increased even salvaged the love in his marriage. What an amazing rescue your poem has accomplished in the real world!
    Who says poetry is unreal, only decorative, impractical? Here is proof that a True Poem can work a natural miracle.

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  • Sudipta BhattacharyyaSudipta Bhattacharyya (6/1/2015 8:30:00 AM)

    Very touchy & heartfelt emotions! Stirring my own personal romantic feelings!
    Thanks for sharing such a piece of art!

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  • Allotey Abossey (5/22/2015 2:11:00 AM)

    Love is a gift.. It's nice talking about emotions by way of poetry. God bless you

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