Yours Poem by Daniel Hoffman

Yours

Rating: 4.2


I am yours as the summer air at evening is
Possessed by the scent of linden blossoms,

As the snowcap gleams with light
Lent it by the brimming moon.

Without you I'd be an unleafed tree
Blasted in a bleakness with no Spring.

Your love is the weather of my being.
What is an island without the sea?

Thursday, November 20, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 18 February 2016

Your love is the weather of my being. What is an island without the sea? Your love is the weather of my being. What is an island without the sea? - In ITALIAN: Il tuo amore sono le stagioni del mio essere. Che cosa è un'isola senza il mare attorno?

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M Asim Nehal 04 October 2015

Wonderful poem......I liked it.

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Rajnish Manga 18 February 2016

I don't think here could be a better set of words worthy of such a lively relationship. Thanks. Without you I'd be an unleafed tree Blasted in a bleakness with no Spring.

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 February 2016

True love is the key! ! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Susan Williams 18 February 2016

Now this is a perfect couplet of truth and image- - - - - - - - - Without you I'd be an unleafed tree Blasted in a bleakness with no Spring.

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Rajnish Manga 18 February 2016

Sentiments expressed by the poet in celebration of his deep love for his beloved. Unmatched. Without you I'd be an unleafed tree Blasted in a bleakness with no Spring.

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Anita Khelawan 18 February 2016

Without you I'd be an unleafed tree.....such a beautiful line... thnx for sharing :)

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Ratnakar Mandlik 18 February 2016

Your love is weather of my being What is an island without the sea? . Sentiments expressed in a superb manner. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Kim Barney 18 February 2016

Best line is the last one: What is an island without the sea?

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