Zero Poem by Sandra Feldman

Zero

Rating: 5.0


A look into the Future,
We and others,
Lots of empty talk,
Remember,
The ones in charge
Are more your jailors,
Than your brothers,
More of the same,
Nothing really changes...
Only some names,
That no fame, gather.

Sunday, October 13, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: human,reality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laurie Van Der Hart 15 October 2019

True, Sandra. Reminds me of the words “Do not put your trust in princes Nor in a son of man, who cannot bring salvation. His spirit goes out, he returns to the ground; On that very day his thoughts perish.”

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 October 2019

So sad yet so true. Because of greediness in people and desire for fame, we are reduced to that level, where hearts ceases to beat for others. A very incisive and insightful write.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 October 2019

A perceptive poem, dear Ma’am Sandra...10+++

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Kostas Lagos 14 October 2019

The ones in charge Are more your jailors, Than your brothers Excellent!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 October 2019

Zero is the future and zero has carried on the reality. Earth is the symbol of all regards. An amazing poem is excellently penned.

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