Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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(001) A Midnight Roamer - Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

It is so beautiful, nice and round
Like a balloon you blow
Spreading light across the night
With it’s warm and golden glow
White clouds cover its baldhead
As though to protect it from the eerie night
And when another cloud takes over
It says farewell and takes flight
Glowing brighter and brighter
As the night grows more and more dark
Lighting up the streets,
My terrace and the park
Rising fast above the horizon
As though in a haste
As though it had no time to lose
No time at all to waste
It yawned and said,
“Now nap time, let me go to the other side”
And before it went to sleep
It looked at our beautiful earth and sighed.


Comments about (001) A Midnight Roamer by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

  • val Rogersval Rogers (1/3/2016 1:23:00 PM)

    You have surpassed many adults with your skills. I am guessing that you are very proud of these
    Skills. Good WORK Risha. Val Brooklyn Rogers
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  • val Rogersval Rogers (1/3/2016 1:17:00 PM)

    You've surpassed many adults with your skill. I know that I've guessed correctly that you are very
    Proud of your skill. Good work.
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  • Akhtar JawadAkhtar Jawad (5/11/2014 8:52:00 PM)

    What a poem! And she is only 12, amazingly beautiful. (Report)Reply

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  • p.a. noushadp.a. noushad (5/28/2010 11:49:00 PM)

    very beautiful imagination, nice verses (Report)Reply

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  • Shikdar Waliuzzaman (5/16/2010 1:30:00 PM)

    Congratulations to you for writing poems in a tender age! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Pandian Angelina (7/11/2009 12:51:00 PM)

    Best beauty, you didn't use the word, the noun even in one place and that makes the poem even more great.
    Angel
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  • Rajeev Sadasivan (6/27/2009 5:43:00 AM)

    Rishakutty....goahead..... (Report)Reply

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  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (4/21/2009 6:11:00 AM)

    B e a u t i f u l compostion! (Report)Reply

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  • Jayan Damodaran (12/26/2008 8:50:00 AM)

    This is the first poem that I happened to read from you Risha!

    And you bowled me over!

    Gimme some time, I'll comment each one of your poems!
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  • p.a. noushadp.a. noushad (6/14/2008 4:09:00 AM)

    nature and the realities of life. (Report)Reply

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  • Diane Violet (2/18/2008 8:02:00 PM)

    Risha this is beautiful...loved the whole poem especially the last line. Hugs, Diane (Report)Reply

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  • Howard Johnson (2/5/2008 10:32:00 AM)

    It has been a while since I have read any of your work, And this one does not dissapoint, A pleasure to read, Excellent Immagery used, Thank you for posting (Report)Reply

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  • Keerthana Mohan (2/4/2008 9:26:00 AM)

    Whether ink or words flow from Risha's pen? A little girl in age, but well matured in her thoughts. (Report)Reply

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  • Indigo Christman (1/27/2008 9:09:00 AM)

    You are ten! ? Wow... (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 27, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, August 17, 2008


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