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[01] For Her

Rating: 3.2

I was feeling aromatic flavor of beauty
But the cloud had covered the full moon
And the gloomy dim evening
put off its costumes

She cried and told, ‘I'm unhappy, '
But I was undone to write a program
To sprout gladness into her garden of mind

I can't enter, can't touch

can't wipe, can't absorb
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Sarwar Chowdhury 08 October 2008

astonishing poem! i liked it. flow of verses excellent! ....10++

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Shimon Weinroth 27 September 2008

moments of frustration, so well described shrieks for identity, well done 10

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Usman Hanif 18 September 2008

despite the gloominess you atleast have the words, the comforting words for her... thats a good point! keep it up

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Sadiqullah Khan 16 September 2008

I can't stop appreciating the air of freshness and 'matter of fact' expression of beauty here, , , ,10

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Viola Grey 16 September 2008

I like this piece...you opened it up beautifully...nice work

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 August 2012

Only what I can do is everything ensuing nothing Can simply act all resulting nil! ... lovely all, , beautiful call, , helplessness.. real beauty in poem...10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 August 2012

Only what I can do is everything ensuing nothing Can simply act all resulting nil! ... lovely all, , beautiful call, , helplessness.. real beauty in poem...10

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Brishti Mazumdar 11 June 2009

Am I having here a critical Ashraful, who is not so satisfied with the self? The flamboyant one whom I got till now evades here....10++ Brishti...

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Can simply act all resulting nil! ....... is it helplessness? what a dilema going on inmind..... well done dear...10

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Flose Boursiquot 18 May 2009

i def liked this one

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