Ashraful Musaddeq

Rookie - 86 Points (Aug 16 1958 / Bangladesh)

[02] Cruel Time - Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

What's happening or to be happened
On the other bank of the river?

Is there any modest bonsai well and good-
Any ribbon to connect far and near?
Occurrence is loosing its phenomenon
Magic can't peeps through eye sights!

Scorching sunny day rolling on dusts
Moon-less night sits on insomniac grill
Dark-blue grief walks on a rope-way
Situation is a cruel demand for network!

Time is walking on the cool wave
Alien is calling from an unknown chip!

Poem 03
Book 'Firefly Can't Make a Day' February 2008
Copyright Writer
Rhythm Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 984-8319-63-8

Comments about [02] Cruel Time by Ashraful Musaddeq

  • (6/9/2009 1:19:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem with well expressed epithets like ''cruel time'' and cognitive metaphors like: ''Time is walking on the cool wave'', used to highlight the transformation of nature under the action of time......I like it very much... so there is my little 10++ for this great poem... (Report) Reply

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  • Maia Padua (5/21/2009 10:17:00 PM)

    flowing with depth....
    as what Palas said..'i can feel but cant express'
    and i too cant express the impact it brings to me, my thoughts into words
    this piece is great...very elegant...meaningful
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  • Palas Kumar Ray (10/4/2008 3:30:00 PM)

    I can feel but can't express the thoughts in me as the Time passes before me in waves and I continue to reamin a silent spectator.Nice imagery. (Report) Reply

  • (10/2/2008 8:13:00 AM)

    Nice work! I enjoy reading you. (Report) Reply

  • Wandering Scarlet (9/20/2008 12:09:00 AM)

    very deep....i cant really comprehend this though lol hopefully you would describe the thoughts you are conveying in this poem? (Report) Reply

  • (9/14/2008 3:56:00 PM)

    what should i say? ? ? ? ? ? ?
    what a poem this is? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
    keep going
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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (8/27/2008 2:19:00 PM)

    'Time is walking on the cool wave'

    wow! amazing! ........10
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  • (8/19/2008 1:13:00 PM)

    I cannot recommernd this writing, but I did give it a 7, which is my highest non recommendation score. The writing is quiite good in fact. The problem is the purpose of the writing and the meaning of the lines. I cannot understand either.

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 4, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 4, 2012

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