Ashraful Musaddeq

Rookie - 86 Points (Aug 16 1958 / Bangladesh)

[02] Eating Baby - Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Sky suffers from acidity
Eats moon at night like
An anti-acid tablet
When we enter
Into the kingdom of death.

Map was eaten up by the hunger
Moon by sky- who is now
Eating baby as a termite?

Poem 04
Book 'Firefly Can't Make a Day' February 2008
Copyright Writer
Rhythm Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 984-8319-63-8

Comments about [02] Eating Baby by Ashraful Musaddeq

  • (8/31/2009 8:11:00 PM)

    Very good and very nice poem. I like it. (10v.) Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt (Report) Reply

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  • (10/27/2008 5:32:00 PM)

    Great imagination, I like the last few senteneces:

    Map was eaten up by the hunger
    Moon by sky- who is now
    Eating baby as a termite?

    Very wonderful, to read such lines..... Termite? Oh, termite can an estate...10.
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  • (10/14/2008 6:14:00 AM)

    must say you do have a way with difficult issues-how lucidly you have dealt with such a touchy nd gory image is remarkable! full 10++ (Report) Reply

  • (10/8/2008 9:33:00 PM)

    Good intelligent imageries using the full moon and the crescent...well, Ashraf, you beat me all out here...I must give you a ten plus (Report) Reply

  • (10/2/2008 8:26:00 AM)

    Very imaginative poem.10++
    Best Wishes.................
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  • (9/20/2008 8:34:00 AM)

    Many imageries pelting one after another. I hardly imagine anything and I've fnished your poem. But haha, don; t worry, It's not bad, I had to scrutinise it line by line though.

    It is certainly a difficult topic you're dealing with; wanting to show how viciouswe have become with this imagery of bing cannabalistic to something so close to our hearts and species- our babies. I felt you brought it out pretty well, and the imageries that you compare to let us understand the next recurring parttern is really interesting. I would have liked it better if it was just a teeny bit more leaborated though, so that I can get it easier, but that's just my own opinion. Good job an the whole!
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  • (9/16/2008 2:40:00 AM)

    very thoughtful work here.... well written.... (Report) Reply

  • Marilyn Lott (9/10/2008 7:37:00 AM)

    Unfortunately this is true. Our planet isn't so pure anymore.
    Well put.

    Best Wishes,
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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 4, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 4, 2012

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