[02] Clean Mind Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

[02] Clean Mind

Rating: 5.0


Don't try to hurt
Bullet-proof mind that puts on iron-curtain
Bayonet-sentences will fall back.

I don't like cloudy face
This is not the season of chrysanthemums
Rainy-ixora is red and red.

Revenge returns like boomerang
Slice and share thoughts
Vinegar nourishes pickles well.

let's clean mind with organic facials.



Poem 02
Book 'Firefly Can't Make a Day' February 2008
Copyright Writer
Rhythm Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 984-8319-63-8

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Estrella Baldemosa 10 September 2008

violence begets violence, it can never achieve peace. thanks... great poem

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Bob Blackwell 11 September 2008

Sticks and stones can break my bones, but names can never hurt me, I was told when young. when grown up it helps to remember this. Well said Ashraful.

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Ester Agustin 17 September 2008

as vinegar nourishes pickles... clean thoughts nourishes the soul..... i like your poem...

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Gargi Saha 25 September 2008

A lovely poem with great vocab. u get 10++++ Thanks for your lovely comment on my poem U R PRECIOUS.

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C T Heart 26 September 2008

Clean mind is a way to clean the heart and soul...and reflects through one's behavior. Healthy to sum it all. a 10.

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Sandra Holguin 24 October 2021

Ask me the question?

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Priyanka Bhowmick 18 June 2009

a butiful msg.. lets clean mind wid organic facials... lovely...10++

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Howard Kern 17 June 2009

You have been truely blessed! ! ! Keep that bullet-poof mind behind your iron-curtin! ! ! A clear mind comes to me with my morning meditation. It is the only way to recharge my gift that flows to the page effortlessly! very nice write 10+++

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let us clean our mind.. that should be message loud n clear... beautiful...10

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Miriam Maia Padua 18 May 2009

a great piece... conveys a great meaning... thoughts' provoking...as always thanks for sharing, Sir 10++

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