Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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(020) About A Tree - Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

It always bows down to me
Just to give me shade
I wish it could come to tea
To taste the cakes I made
Why is it in the danger?
Of the axe and the saw
It is not a stranger
With it's many a sandy paw
The tree bear pretty flowers
Of whom there are many lovers
I wish it would come to tea
Just the tree and me!


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  • (10/7/2007 11:36:00 AM)

    This poem is excellent Risha! Funny and sad at the same time Very good!
    with love Pia
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  • (9/24/2007 4:17:00 AM)

    beautiful...i enjoyed it...hope everone has a feeling like this, how much of the nature could be saved and atmosphere be kept clean.... thnx lill princess (Report)Reply

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  • (3/23/2007 7:45:00 PM)

    I enjoyed reading this wonderful poem. It was really nice, and when I read it, I felt I was next to the tree having tea. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/20/2007 11:34:00 AM)

    A very beautiful idea, Risha. I'm sure the tree would love your cakes and give you some extra shade the next time you sit under its branches. Thanks for making me smile on a grey day.
    Magda
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  • (3/14/2007 5:11:00 AM)

    A tree for tea, well bless me there is a Novelty sounds a bit barking to me... Risha (Report)Reply

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  • (12/15/2006 9:55:00 AM)

    I could feel myself climbing its swaying branches with the wind blowing my hair.
    Urban sprawl is the evel demon that remover such fun companions.
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  • Cyclopseven R (12/11/2006 1:19:00 PM)

    Good write Risha. I like this very much. One day it may just appear for a cup of tea, just be prepared :) . (Report)Reply

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  • (11/29/2006 11:10:00 AM)

    Yes Risha; keep bringing in trees, the flowers, birds and butterflies the way you see them; into your poems (Report)Reply

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  • (11/24/2006 11:19:00 PM)

    This is a very nice poem you've written about your friend the tree Risha. I enjoyed it very much. Well done........................Diane (Report)Reply

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  • (11/21/2006 9:01:00 PM)

    Ya, I find a common theme. That was a nice poem. Good job... (Report)Reply

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  • (11/12/2006 4:25:00 AM)

    This is an excellent tree-poem! ! What a lovely portrait you paint of your tree..beautifully done-Pia (Report)Reply

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  • (10/10/2006 4:14:00 AM)

    very imaginative and beautifull poem....established new reletion with tree (Report)Reply

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  • (10/10/2006 3:51:00 AM)

    good...well written...nice... (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 10, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 14, 2010


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